Reviews for For My King
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30
I don't understand you story
do wolfam remember he past in the end
he sould like he be abuse in the past
I think wolfam was froce to stay with Yuuri when
Yuuri dosen't not need outgrown wolfram they just throw him under the bus the only thing that matters to keep the king safe happy

I give you fanfiction 2 out of five stars because it don't make sense few more chapter was necessary
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
Heart-wrenching.. Cruel.. Tragic... Simply loved the narrative from Wolfram's P.O.V. Best fanfic I have read in ages. Hats off to you for telling the story without much of actual dialogues even. I actually love the loose-ends, about how he lost his memory, why his brothers also betrayed him; it just adds to the tragedy of it all. And the constant dilemma and hurt that he experienced was conveyed so well.
I got so involved in the story that I had to keep reminding myself that this isn't real, that Yuuri would never do that to Wolfram in real life(Ironic).
The worst part is, even though Yuuri's character had a 180 flip, Wolfram's actually made sense. He would sacrifice himself and do anything, be anything, for his king.
Good job!
guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
well i did like it. ughhh! but i really cant explain why. wolf is my fav. i guess i am a bit of a sadist.
the yuuri here is not the goodie one i came to love. yuuri loves wolf and always loves to spoil his puu(prince). and also the family of wolf is disappointing. how could they?
end of rant~
Nickesha chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Damn can't believe yuuri did wolf like that ugh
Miss Ai Naz chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
Oh wow, this story is interesting although I don't quite understand what has happen to Wolfram in the earlier part of the story and what has actually happen in his past life? Even so, this is a very nice fic about Wolfram's POV... It's full of love, pain and sorrow yet I'm sure Yuuri did also love Wolfram in the end... :-)
sierrafujoshiakut chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Whatttttt
I'm emotional wrecked
I cry
My tears won't stop falling
Dammit Yuri you big asshole
And what the fuck is wrong with everybody in the castle
How did Wolfram lose his memory in the first pplace
This story is so fucking annoying
You make me really hate Yury and everyone
I wanna hug wolfram
Poor baby

But you did a good job, the Angsty is very heavy. I praise you for that.
Enanja chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
What just happened? Is it gonna end like that? Nooooooo!
8772929 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
this is just plain wrong and he should had die. there nothing but question. clear their should be part two the story or something. I am not satisfied.
sighcoe chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Awwww... the story is so freaking sad. So freaking annoying at the same time! I'm upset with how everyone treated Wolfram during the time he lost his memory, how could they do that to him? They even made him their servant. They're so cruel to the point that I wanted to enter to your story and give them some piece of my mind! Even Gwendal! OMG! tsk tsk...
PuffinSunday Muffin chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Wow... This is just so sad... and well written. I really love this story even if it hurts me. I... I don't like the way things turned out in here... but the turn out of this story... just made this story powerful.

Although I honestly can't say much right now... since this one had made me so... sad. :C

I really love the way you had written this too. And the way you had depicted Wolfram... is really amazing. I really like it that you had narrated this story from his POV. It just made the story more heart-wrenching... and mysterious. I mean I kept questioning things and things in this story while reading this!

May I ask a few questions though? Although its okay if I'll never get the answers... but still...

Why is it that everyone had made Wolfram as a servant? Why had no one initially objected about it? Is it related to Yuuri's dilemma over Wolfram's insistence about their marriage? How did Wolfram lost his memory exactly? And why does it seems like everyone is okay with it? :C Why made him a servant? Why not send him to the Bielefeld lands? How did Waltorana reacted to this improper treatment on his beloved nephew? Did Yuuri loved Wolfram? Or had he just lusted after him during the time where his daughter was not yet delivered on this world? So Yuuri was in love Lady Sophia? And in the end, Wolfram will forever be Yuuri's object of lust?

Aaaa! This is making me think a lot? But really why had Yuuri consented to this! XOOO

I really, really want to hate Yuuri in here. But I think I have to understand it... but still... Wolfram... MAI GAWSSSHHH! XOOO

I wish there'll be a somewhat response to this story... told from Yuuri's POV.

This is simply mind boggling for me!

This is a really awesome story! Thank you for writing and sharing this! I can really call this a masterpiece! But still... Poor Wolf. :C For the rest of his life, he is going to suffer. I really love the idea that Yuuri's daughter turned out to be Greta and that Wolfram likes her?
Meel Jacques chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
My God, you worship a sad story.

But I loved it.

Yuuri was wrong. He should love Wolfram. And not only that ... stop betraying his queen. COWARD!

Kisses and Hugs,

Meel Jacques
cyanide and happiness chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
sequel please please

p.s-i love you
pikeebo chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
What! the whole family and yuuri gave wolfram up to be a servant and then took advantage of his amnesia so yuuri can get out of an engagement!

This is cruel!

and wolfram was happy with it .. ? wow ... that is really the result of a totally abused person ... totally giving in for the name of "love" ... I can't imagine his brothers would do that for him so help yuuri get out of engagement ..

this is so angst ... sobsob ..
It's Rayning chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
More! More! There must be more!

/searches for sequel

.../disappointed
tk04 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
no freaken way. this is so good. their have to be part two or something. It so touching and sad. Thank you for sharing this loving story on
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