Very nice. Short sharp and sweet. I honestly don't think you could have ended this any better.

I realise that this post/story has been around a while but I thought that you, or other readers, might like to know where the quote that inspired you came from. Assuming you haven't found it already, it's from a TV show called Firefly. Think Cowboys in spaceships and you wouldn't be too far off. Very good show, highly recommend even if there was only one season made.

So sweet!

wesome

Aww. cute nakamaship. This is now one of my favorite stories.

truly a great story - I love the conclusion, it was amazingly beautiful :)

Fluff, I needed you so badly...

Good story, but some obvious spelling mistakes once or twice (I hate those, they always sneak in no matter how hard you try to keep them out!)

Zoro would so complain about everything being the same :D!

Yes. Just yes.

I'm in LOVE with Zoro's last line 3 Such a nice detail ~

It's amazing how you managed to get LUFFY , of all people, defeated so easily without getting him ooc and still keeping it realistic

xDDD So cute~! I love it~

D'awwwwww, this one shot is adorable! The quote was so cute and awesome~!

A few typos but nothing major~

I really liked it ;D

This was a masterpiece! I really loved it! And I enjoyed reading a lot! You know, at the beginning I thought: Huh? Some bounty hunters defeating Luffy? But the explanation really made sense and no wonder Luffy couldn't beat them with their cowardly fighting style! So good thing Zoro took care of them! -

The ending was very nice and cute! And I like the quote at the ending, it's great and it fitted this story so well! :D So thank you for writing and keep up the great work! :3

Good chapter !

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