Ziva is ruining this story

Ok yup im done so sick of ziva ALWAYS getting in the eay of good fanfics might as well just make it about her as all everyone cares about is giving her focus in fanfics

Ugh i swear one more chapter with stupid ziva getting to much focus and im done why did SHE get attacked Mcgee would of been a better choice after all zivas a trained killer Mcgee idn't

Ziva needs less focus she should have the amount abby gets (hardly nothing) and abby should get the amount ziva is currently getting ziva sucks

A wonderful and well written story. I enjoyed it a whole lot. Thank you for sharing. :D

Hi Emma...just found this story tonight...love this first chapter...moving on with much anticipation!

Loved this story.

Wow
There are no better words to describe this story.
Wow.

I started reading this today because I wanted to read a good Tony fan-fic and I finised it today.
You made me laugh, you made me roll my eyes and you even made me scream, both in suspense and frustration.

I am completely honest when I say that this is the best NCIS fan-fiction that I have ever read. This could've come straight out of the actual show and I loved everythig about it.

The raw emotions to the complicated relationships with everybody...

You kept me in my bed, on my iPod, the entire day because I HAD to finish reading. When my parents asked me what I had done earlier today at dinner, I told them that I was reading an amazing fanfic before telling them all about everyone getting abducted and all that. Knowing me, they quickly changed the subject.

I know that this was written years ago, and I am not sure if you will ever see this. If you do, however, I would like to say that those agents are idiots for not taking you. What I also want to say is that Harry Potter was turned down by 13 publishers before it was published by the last one. And guess what? It became one of the most famous books of all time!

Don't stop dreamig, don't stop believing and especially, don't EVER stop writing.
If you do, I shall personally hunt you down and force you to.
Got it?
Good.

I loved your story.
Thank you for sharing this 3

Love, Ellie

(I don't have an account yet but I am getting one and once I have it I shall message you to make sure that you know hoe much I loved your work. Goodbye for now!)

Great Chapter And Story! Love The Ending With The Cartoon!

Great Chapter! Love Tony And Gibbs At The End! Can't Wait To Read Another Chapter!

Great Chapter! Love Jimmy And Tony At The End Of The Chapter! Can't Wait To Read Another Chapter!

Great Chapter! Glad That Tony Talked To Gibbs And That Ziva Talked To Tony! Can't Wait To Read Another Chapter!

Great Chapter! Glad That Tony Is Safe! Can't Wait To Read Another Chapter!

Great Chapter! Glad That They Found Tony But Hope That He Will Be Okay! Can't Wait To Read Another Chapter!

Great Chapter! Hope That Tony Holds On Until They Find Him! Can't Wait To Read Another Chapter!