Sam has good instincts for people and Dean wouldn't always be lucky in who he picked up in bars. This is an excellent cautionary tale.

Awesome story! I really like how you write. Thanks so much!

Omg poor Dean. I thought you handled it very well, without giving too much away. I think it's a real shame that you don't have many reviews, all I can think of is that your sentence structure might be a little incoherent and perhaps a more specific summary with more tag words might help. I'm awful at summaries myself, I just can't seem to grasp them.

I thought you did a very good job with this story and wish you luck with future ones.

I really loved this story as well as your others! You have a great writing style and you have story ideas unlike anyone else's.

Though I don't like to think about what Dean might have suffered, it seems likely that he's come across some people who don't play nice. You handled the situation so well, didn't focus on what had happened but on how Sam felt, how protective Sam had vowed to be. And I totally love your protective Sam, the way the brothers bond is unbreakable now after all that they have been through, that they will literally do anything...and in this case, NOT do anything for each other just because they asked.

I'll try to post reviews for your other stories because they are great too. A truckload of people should be reading and reviewing everything you have posted! Please keep writing and posting! I'm out here and I'm really impressed with your talent and your thought processes!

I've not had much luck lately getting much in the way of reviews for my SN stories either but I keep plugging along, because it even one person's day is made by my story it's worth it. And that's how you should feel. Your stories have made my day...had me reading until 2am most of this week!

Anyway, one thing I might suggest to get more people finding these gems of yours it to be more specific in your descriptions of your stories. You need to hook them with the brief description, pull them in, make them click on your story. Let people know that this isn't a fluff piece, that it's got heart and soul and sappy brotherly love. Everything that makes a wonderful SN story.

Can't wait for more stories from you!

Have a great day

Cheryl W.