This sounds good

Ominous

Hello Flypaper-Writer,

I'm not sure why I feel odd. I know you'd feel weird about it as well but even if it's been 5 long years since you posted this story, this chapter, I am still hopeful that you'd decide to come back and continue what lovely version you have. The summary made me curious. It's appealing to be honest. I'd like to think that my imagination is drooling right now, asking for more of what you have to offer. I do hope you find in your heart the courage to come back and continue writing this, it's such a shame you didn't continue it. But nevertheless, I will be patiently waiting.

Kind regards,
Just Gyle

love it very much! Please continue!

wow this is great update soon please!

I like the way Alice as been introduced in the story!:)

I can't wait for the next update. This will definitely be interesting. Not many people delve into past scenes like this. I like it. :D

I don't know why this question is bothering me but I'll ask anyway. You said in the story that Bella wasn't liked because of how she loomed. I was wondering if she actually looked like a homeless person as in dirty torn clothes and what not or was she just simply wearing men's clothing with noting wrong with them except being on a woman's body?

nice chapter you got me hooked!

I LOVED the update.

I like the fact that it showed the past.

lovely. i like it very well. and i hope you update soon and publish regularly new chapters :)

and i like the idea which bella is a vampire first.

An update! Yay!

It was beautiful. Graceful...:) I'm officially following this story...please don't take too long to update. And please, Bellice back in time :D

oooooh very interesting D...this is different...i like it...cant wait for more. Hope you post again soon )

Interesting story, i really can't wait to see what happens. Poor Alice having to put up with her ahole father. Curious as to how old is alice in 1918. Cool story so far.