Sad...
I can imagine what happened to Zorua...
I think I need to cut down on the Tragedy fics...
Well written! FFN needs more like you!

Another beautiful piece. I love how bittersweet this is, especially Anthea and N's interaction; your descriptions are wonderful and they really bring out the emotion of the piece. ;w; And I loved the N/Touko, especially the line "...whispering all the words he knew she needed to hear". And the ending was perfect. This fic was truly wonderful. ;w;

Simple but (bitter)sweet. I like it the way it is.

Though judging by Touko's crying...did she lose against N in this story?

Heck yeah add another one please it a wonderful story :D

I like it :D

Yes, yes, do a second shot, please! *pouts* I want more 'hints' of ferriswheel, and I want to know what happened to Zorua! Preferably nao, please~ :3

How sweet and sad but mostly sweet, Anthea and Concordia are like mothers to N man I wish both the girls and N will appear in gen VI it will be cool.

Dang... That was short, but it blew my mind. Wonderful in it's simplicity. Not a word was said by any character, but it felt powerful all the same. I enjoyed that you wrote Anthea... I think that's something that needs to be delved into by a good writer.

You know that saying, "90% of anything is crap, the remaining 10% is worth dying for"? This is definitely shaping up to be that 10%. The pokemon fandom needs more writers like you.

This is really... beautiful. Not to mention well written, and amazingly deep.

Great job. Do keep it up, this fandom needs more good writers like you.

Definitely add more. Add as much as you want, i'd love to see more of this!

Your descritption is perfect, and i swear i couldn't find a single spelling/grammar mistake. The lack of dialouge made it all even better.

All in all, it was beautiful. This could make a great one-shot/drabble collection.

I'll add to my alert list just in case you want to continue it~

And since i loved it so much, i'll go check the rest of your stuff!

So keep up the good work! ;)

This is wonderful and soooo sad. Well, more bittersweet than anything. I really love the way you introduced Anthea. Really, she and Concordia were like his parents in all the ways that Ghetsis never was, and I think you did that relationship justice in this piece. And the hint of Ferris Wheel never hurts, of course. :)

Great job! I think this would be wonderful with a second part, whenever you get around to it!

Oh jeez... *Shudders* No, I love the implication of the Zorua, and Anthea's "punishment". Sometimes you need things stated plainly, but more often I find that implication is so much better than just stating it outright. (Which is a bit of a problem for me, since I tend to be very eager and hyperactive and the like).

But then what about N's Zoroark in the final battle?