gah, I wanted to give this a shot, but the centered alignment put me off entirely. Why not have a left alignment like a normal person?

At least the encounter seems completely natural and unplanned!

I'm guessing that Zorua disguised himself as a Plasma Grunt to learn that little nugget of information.

I really love how you portray the characters in the story. Even the Pokemon have well-thought personalities! It's really interesting seeing their conversations between them and N, along with between just themselves. It's a really nice touch!

And everything is so detailed, it falls together perfectly! Especially that background story of Touko and Touya. Awh man, I feel so bad for them now :c

Wow, it's been such a long time since you've updated. I do hope to see more one day tho. I really like where this is going

I like the idea of a ribbon around Purrloin's neck, an elegant way to hide an ugly scar.

Omg ): still no update Dx i hope one day you'll be available for one u.u no pressure

*Reads amazing story then looks at the updated date* :( *cries tears of sadness* I've read some of your author notes so I guessing that life caught up with you. Good Luck *waves goodbye*

Are you still going to finish this? I'd love to read more!

When are you updating

I definitely hopes this continues. This is a well done piece of literature and its one of the very few good stories that I can really sink my teeth into.

I read this story and... Wow. You are a extremely talented writer, and I love this story. I I see you haven't updated in a while and I really you hope you continue! Please take this into consideration. (:
Natalie

Nice, but it can be confusing, add to the setting and which the characters are, other than than,

Please, you have to update this! It's so incredible and amazing. I love how you portrait the characters mainly N. Please, update!

This is a fantastic fanfic. I decided to take a foray into the Pokemon world on a curious whim. I never expected to find something nearly so well-written as this. I was thrilled when I played Black/White to see that the series took a gamble on a slightly more invested storyline, with more complex themes and more of a foil to the main character as opposed to an outright antagonist. Their chemistry was decent considering the simplicity of the game, and your story is a beautiful attempt at hashing out those details that some of us adult players may have wanted to see.

I notice you haven't updated this in a while. I certainly hope you find the motivation to do so sometime. I love what you have so far!

N is quite dangerous, isn't he? But in his eyes, so is Touko.