| Reviews for On the Beach |
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  sonnyboy chapter 6 . 10/13/2019 awesome |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/13/2019 I can actually imagine cartana in tis |
| RexTheHero chapter 16 . 2/13/2019 This was a good fanfic series. I hope even when you become an original author you will stil write fanfics. You have great potential and I hope I can read one more of your fanfics soon |
| Steven Hampshire chapter 1 . 8/18/2018 Enjoyed. Thanks for the read. |
 Cipher32 chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 *Cough* That...was quite a way to start a story lol. |
| 4Eva Knight chapter 2 . 6/3/2018 Hot. |
| 4Eva Knight chapter 1 . 6/3/2018 Awesome. |
| unknown wolf chapter 8 . 5/1/2018 dude... why... so damn good! |
| Uknown wolf chapter 6 . 5/1/2018 really good man! you definitely know the inside of a pelican |
| Jacob Coleman chapter 9 . 1/4/2018 That was the hottest and steamiest chapter ever Loved it. |
| Jacob chapter 8 . 1/4/2018 This was the hottest chapter ever |
| AdamRo1118 chapter 1 . 12/17/2017 Still one of the best johntana fics out there |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/3/2017 G |
| John chapter 1 . 8/5/2017 Wtf i would never do this |
| AceOfMetalicNights chapter 11 . 7/11/2017 Hell yeah |
