Me dejaste muy triste con el final :"/ pobres Jack y Sally, espero algun sigas con esto ;)
(Llore en este capitulo :"( )no me esperaba todo lo que Jack tuvo que pasar por culpa de Oogie
Bueno me dejaste mal ;(
Saludos (2019)

Wow... impresionante sin palabras ;)
(2019)

Me gusto mucho todo desde la personalidad de Jack hablando de esa marena con flink jajajjaja xD sigue asi :) saludos (2019)

Whoa, cool explanation of Jack's depression. I would love to see more of how Jack earned his crown and maybe a meeting between all the Holiday heads would be awesome

Who, awesome!

Cool ties with the monsters we know about. I like the history part of it too, ever thought about having Jack mention Sleepy Hollow? Or when he became King?

Drunk on holy water, pretty funny

Such creative back stories, awesome

Seeds of love already planted, nice on Gertrude. I like how you have Sally call Jack out on his manners too, good attention to detail

So cute, I admire how you had Jack handle everything and how Sally reacted, very in character

wow
i love your fanfic
i cant begin to describe how awesome it is
i cant even find the rite words to describe it
plz plz continue writing to the end
you are an amazing writer
so do plz continue
i just love how to write this particular fanfic

Oh my goodness gracious! That was fabulous! This story is wonderful and you're so clever with how tied everything into it! I don't know if you're done with this story, but one more chapter kind of closing everything would be very much loved! *hint hint* *wink wink* :D

Oh this chapter was fabulous! I loved it!

This is awesome! I'm excited to read the next chapter!

Ha! Holy Water! Pfffffft! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Love it.