Very good Job. i did get a bit confused cause the names roxas and axel are similar and i mixed them up while reading so i had to read slow. very mysterious and i like the bits of humor.

I really enjoyed this so far. It's a good introduction to the story - small details but soo much to learn. It makes me curious.

I like it because it's not a depressing ghost fic So I look forward to what you will do with it.

I look forward to the future chapters and I hope inspiration stays with you for it ;D

Ohhh interesting, love to read more!

I love this so much I can't wait to read more!

Wow, that was really good!

I loved how you added Esmerelda and Frollo into the story, it was very clever. I'm also glad to see that you've not written Roxas as a self-absorbed whiny teen like so many other writers _-

Can't wait for the next chapter, this story looks good!

Amazing story so far and I can't wait for the update so I can read more. There's a lot of stuff that seems unanswered, like how did Axel come to be with Roxas? How did he die? How come Roxas can see ghosts and send them off? This must be like a teaser chapter before all the good stuff gets going, right? Either way, this is a very interesting story, and I love the idea.

Great work.