How sad. Really. I mean, this is one of an interesting story I've ever read. And, you broke your promise. You said you will update this as soon as possible, but nothing. This is 2016 after all.
I do not know you will read this or not, but I hope you will. And I hope you will come back and update this story, please.

I wish you;d continue! I love the story line for this! XD

Waaaaah summer 2011 is already finished! Y u still not back?
Please update :)

interesting story I would like to see where this goes. makes me wonder what changed luffy?

I don't mind you adding a new side to luffy, as long as you can explain where it came from, or how/why he has hidden it for so long. You don't have to do this to minor/small type characters, but when you use a majorly known/popular character like luffy, be sure to have an explanation ready.

"In order to build a solid story, you the writer must know at least ten times more about the world you write than the reader" Paraphrase from Dragon Con.

I am like being overexcited about this! Derishishishi! Please continue as fast as you possibly can. Oh, your English is fine and if you mess up I will definitely uncode it! Aight Peecs!

Yay your back and it's ok thank for telling us why you haven't updated but please continue as soon as your done typing and editing it cause I wanna see Luffy's explanation for acting that way.

Keep up the good work...and don't stop writing on this story or any other stories you've written or will write.

also thanks for typing these chapters.

And it appears you've run into troubles. To prevent losing progress in stories, save them into a flash drive as well, so if your computer crashes, you maintain the story.

The story so far is... basic. I'm not sure if rape would be the best way to go for a romance/drama, that belongs more to hurt/comfort.

You should work on your grammar, there are several things you could do... One, reread your work, and use your own knoledge of the english language to find basic errors, or 2nd, get a beta reader to fix these things for you.

The story is coming off quite nicely though.

alright then.

Did you die! I NEED to know what happens next! :

This is a great beginning, this story has a lot of potential. I don't really see how you're going to incorporate rape into this, because by the way she was observing Luffy I think Nami's going to be totally willing, unless it's Nami raping Luffy XD that would be totally hilarious! Instead of him tying her, I think she should tie him to the bed ;)

Anyway I think you're spelling is fine, except for here and there but everyone has typos (except me, because I'm a freak :P)

Please continue!

I likey

Please update soon

MAKE MORE CHAPTERS NAOWWWWWR

you should continue the story. i want to know what happens next.

The theme of this story is refreshing, I li~ke it xD

Please do continue soon, I'm really anticipating to read the enxt chapter!

Regarding the spaces for each line or paragraph, I thinks its okay (I just press enter to have spaces between each line/paragraph) and your writing style is great too :D