This story is so good .. love the plot .. and their characters fit so well ... their lovely dovey moments are so cute and nice ... still waiting for that 2 last chapters ... even if it passed 5 years

It's been 4 years! Please update :,(

I'm gonna guess that Croc's the boss.

Whoo I liked this a lot! :D please continue!

I love this story...good job! 3
The necklace that zoro gave sanji was my fav. part, i dont know why but it was really sweet /

I love this story! Please update!

Omg i really enjoyed this ! Is Luffy the boss ?

Hey guys! Sorry about the delay! I'm only revising the whole story so it'll be continued soon! I think that the older chapters were very rushed so I'm going ahead and re writing them! Thanks for all of your reviews! TT

Wahhh! Why'd you stop there? :( It's a fantastic story so far. I'm excited to see how it ends!

Great story so far! I am really likeing it. I wonder who the boss is. I get the idea it might be Mihawk.

yes! Yes! Love it! More MORE! *smiiileees~*

Oh, can't wait to see who this person are that Sanji apparently knows .,,

UPDATE SOON, PWEASE~? *puppy-look-of-doom*

XD

Have a nice sunday~!

Hugs

Pernille

I find it really funny that you used the dolls to signify where the lemon was, ha ha. I was going to say in earlier chapters that it would be helpful if you clarified who was saying the dialogue more (because when the sentence is split up, the action responses of the *other character made it confusing as to who was talking), but this chapter was much clearer. Anywho, I find this story interesting, but I think in certain parts you could get a little more introspective of the characters? ('Cause I love them so much, ha ha)

MAH! im so so sorry, but i just dont have the time this week to review this properly. (things have been hectic) and while i dont have time to talk about everything i want to (you know me, i go on and on and on.) there's one or two things i cant go without talking about.

First, Zoro taking sanji to meet his friends and gang members. WOW. if sanji didnt get the hint that their are feeling-y stuff going on between them yet then he really must be blind! the fact that zoro took him to meet them speaks wonders coz it doesnt only say that he likes sanji enough to introduse him but that he trust's him enough to let him know his clostest friends' identities.

sanji's reaction to this was really important too. why? because he didnt react. he just didnt. he didnt start freaking out and questioning it, or start wondering about the things i've just mentioned and instead was more anxious about whether or not zoro's friends would like him. like i said, WOW. sanji really needs to get a clue and realise his own feelings.

also, im guessing sanji must be a little hearbroken huh? after zoro doing something as nice to get him a job as a cook, the whole building goes down in flames. poor guy.

what im most interested to see in the next chapter is sanji's reaction to zoro's apparent "dissapearance". will he be fairly worried for his friend or will he be compleatly distraught and desperate? will he just go back home and hope for a call, or will he spend most of his time at zoro's hoping the man would come back? would he cry? and what about when zoro does come back? will he just be a little angry and very relieved or will he cry the tears he's held back and shout at zoro how worried he's been? WILL HE THROW HIMSELF INTO ZORO'S ARMS AND BEG HE MAKE LOVE TO HIM SO THAT HE KNOWS FOR SURE ZORO IS THE-*cough, cough* sorry about that, got carried away. but yeah, thats the main part thats going to be forcing me to my computer chair for the next chapter.

crocadiles being awefully pushy for sanji to learn more about the strawhats, does sanji not find this suspicious? will he continue to give crocadile info unknowingly? or is he secretly suspicious of him and start giving him false information? only you will tell!

i was actually quite surpriesed at what you did with the whole zeff thing. i can honestly say that i didnt expect it but sanji's humiliation at giving up being his reason for not speaking to zeff very much anymore actually seems like a ver plausible reason. i liked it. i also liked that All Blue was his reason for trying AND his reason for giving up. thanks to people's critique of his dream he ended up giving up cooking alltogether when usually (and originally) it was his whole reason for started the proffesion in the first place! i REALLY liked that and found it to be a very clever little twist.

sorry for all and any spelling mistakes and Typo's, im rushing you see. thank you for this chapter and much love back to you! thank you for mentioning about the zeff idea and mentioning my name in your AN, you didnt have to and i wouldnt have minded if you didnt but it very much warms my heart . i VERY much look forward to the next chapter. Ja! xxx

I am SO SO sorry i've taken so long to review. my fanfiction login and hotm*il login sites havent been working (want to know what the problem was? my computer thought it was 2002 ...this apparently effects everything!) so yes, i've been freaking out for the past 6 or so days over the fact im keeping you waiting for a reply and im SO sorry.

anyway, on with that reply...

Eh? you want to use my idea? *wiggles and blushes* i'd be honered (although its not really much to take credit for..) go ahead i'd be very much excited to see what you do with it.

*Giggle* i really dont know what it is about it, but the sanji-zoro cuddle scenes are what really get to me :3 there's just so many underlying feelings there and i just love it. i love how both zoro AND sanji have insecurities about the other and not just zoro worrying about/being hurt by sanji's womanising but sanji's also (even if he doesnt want to acknolege it) hurt by the idea that he's just one of many men for zoro.

i think in a way that with everything sanji's doing: intergrating himself into zoro's life, scaring off his ex (which i loved btw) and making himself someone zoro can be himself around, that sanji wants zoro to notice him more than other people. i think he's decided without realising that because zoro could have anyone, that sanji would have to make himself seem special, to make zoro think he was special. i think that sanji likes him alot more than he's willing to let on (hence why an ashtray given to him by zoro suddenly becomes important to him)

it was mentioned that zoro isnt really one for "romantic-cr*p" but then with sanji, he's pretty much got the perfect kind of romance factor going on with him. i think that in a way zoro wants to be more like that with sanji, not just because of him feelings but because he knows its a type of romance sanji cant get with a woman and i knda see it as zoro trying to make him yearn for it. and since sanji doesnt go for any other men than zoro, he'd be going back to zoro to get it. ( i guess i kinda see it as zoro's way of trying to keep sanji for himself)

i cant help but love that sanji is so comfortable with zoro; comfortable enough to let his guard down and sleep with him hovering right over him. its sweet .

oooh! a longer chapter next time? well i'll definatly be looking forward to that! again im sorry for being such a late reviewer! see you soon yush? :3 x x

wuaah! please update soon~! i really like where this is going!