Why are you making animagus talk in their form? It's not possible. They are literally animals. At least explain why animagus are able to talk? Along with the Phoenix? Cause having things change with no type of explanation is quite irritating.

So I discovered this chain of stories yesterday evening and reading ever since. I don't review often, but I noticed a mistake I wanted to mention in this chaper. Before I get to that however, I wanted to mention you are fantastic writer, I love all the character developments and you decision on what characters were in Harry's 'squad' such as obviously Draco, the twins, Hermione, Blaise and later the not really additions to the group, but friendships with Percy and Oliver. I agree I always thought Percy was just misunderstood in the books, when you have few friends you tend to stick to what you know, even if doing so also doesn't help you make any friends. I also love the pairings, the twins one is an interesting twist I didn't see coming, but it would be interesting if Blaise made them a triad.. because I feel he either leans that way or may end up with Hermione. I love the Remus/Snape future pairing that is being build. And Papa Sev is like the cutest name. Loving Draco/Harrys bond and its growth as well. Now on to the correction. If you look where you wrote "MAURADERS MAP" and look down from there you will find what I speak of. "A labled dot in the corner showed that Professor Dumbledoor was pacing in his study;" I thought that Dumbledoor in your story has already beem kicked out of the castle, since McGonnagal is now Headmistress. If thats the case why is he still in the castle? Also minor mistake I wouldn't mention if I wasn't already reviewing. Remus mentions: "Does Rob have a rat..." Minor name typo. Anyway I shall carry on now.

I don't usually comment. But this chapter deserves one. OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO ADORABLE. REMUS AND SEVERUS SITTING IN A TREE K.I.S.S.I.N.G. FIRST COMES LOVE. THEN COMES MIRAGE. THEN COMES A BABY DRINKING ALCOHOL.

LOVE IT!

SIRIUS is the one with the cruel streak? Maybe, if he loses his temper, but in case you forget, in Snape's Worst Memory, Sirius is the one to make James at least start to lay off Snape before Lily intervenes.

22 O you are so amazing at writing can't wait to see what's next

YOU ARE AMAZING! THANK YOU!

I take it Blaise will mate with Hermione?

Will Sirius and Remus be good or bad in this story?

YAY!

Great story

Absolutely hung up on this ... interesting retelling. IO know this thing is LONG complete but did your realize that you have Dumbledore in his quarters on the map?

you wrote "A labeled dot in the top left corner showed that Professor Dumbledore was pacing his study"
dumbledores not there anymore

Nice of Lucius to invite everyone along

I'm beginning to wonder how much of the word count is from author notes.