I’m sobbing

Bwaahh! I can't believe you flipped it around like that! So sad! For a second I was thinking he would make it. Love that you had Haley fill that piece of crap with lead though.

Oh god...I'm literally crying right now...that was...amazing. I felt so sad for Jack, asking when Daddy would be home...and Haley...god...i cant even explain. great job.

Oh! That was painful, and beautiful. I really like how you wrote Foyet in there. He was callous, cold, perfectly done, and made a terrific foil to what was happening between Haley and Hotch.

great story

Even though I cried, I thought it was good. You may want to consider changing the rating though, due to the language, just incase. Nicely done and thanks for sharing!