I know writing fanfiction takes time, but this was written in 2011 and it is now 2018, that’s a long time to be working on a 3 chapter, even by my standards.

Mor Pls!

i really like this it seems really interesting

Iz good, mor pls.

I actually am enjoying where this is going. I can't wait to see more, so keep up the good work! ;)

This looks really intresting and I would love to see it contuine but I don't believe you will since your last update was in 2011 And it's 2015 haha wow But I hope you prove me wrong and update again

You have to continue that! :O
Something different for a change... I want to know what happens next! :D

I guess there wont be a next chapter, huh ._. I liked that ff really, and i was very excited what would happen next.. But since you didnt updated for so long, well, my hopes gone to zero.. ;_; .. anyways these 2 chapters were cool though :3

HURRY IT UP! NO RUSH -ILLINOIS

C'mon! Please update! *gives you kicked puppy look*

I love the plot of the story, the pairing (Go uke Desmond!), and the way it's written. A lot of stories irritate me with kind of choppy sentences, but this one flows smoothly. The only thing I want to see from this fic, is longer chapters. But that's because I like long chappies. :)

I really hope you write the next chapter. Though it's unlikely seeing how long it has been since you've updated this story. If you find the time, please update! I really do appreciate this fic. (Can't wait for the meeting and the EziDesAlt bits! :D)

Keep on writing!

Shimmers

;_; Update please?.. I luvs this.

Please update

This should be interesting. Trying to convince your ancestors that you are their descendent. I look forward to the next chapter.

Brilliant start, good writing, interesting plot twist to and old idea and smooth pacing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this unique plot! The detail in description and character portrayal was beautifully done. Hope to read more soon. :-)