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That was really nice XD thank you for that

i absolutely love this story

I LOVE FUTANARI

Awwwww! So cute! I really enjoyed that... I dunno why but I really like futanari xp Especially if Ritsu's it! xD Love'em both!

Great work, keep it up! :D Imma be looking forward to your next faficions!

~LenxRinKagamine

PS: No worries, by the way, not many grammmatical errors ;)

*shivers* This was the most romantically-written futanari fic about Mio and Ritsu EVER! XD So sweet, especially the whole 'destiny's path' and their childhood friend bond. *grin* Ritsu as shy? x3 Such a bonus to this adorable feeling! XD I love the ending where Sawako stops Mugi and Yui, and the whole understanding of the moment itself. Awesome job, this story was well-done and sweetly intense.

Very beautiful and passionate... best story i've read in a long time 3

uh how can ritsu have a cork?

same thing that Yaaga "Futanari in my K-ON section? HELL! FUCKING! YEAH!"

... x lo demas... me encanto solo eso te puedo decir

u.u I'm not good at english sorry

First things first: Futanari in my K-ON section? HELL! FUCKING! YEAH!

Onto more serious praise: For starters, especially considering English is not your native language, I found remarkably few grammatical and spelling errors. Very good job in that regard. Secondly, allow me to congratulate you on how you wrote this. It almost seems the sex took a backseat to the emotion, or was riding shotgun at best. Few people manage this, I myself can only think of one other instance I would say that of off-hand. As for the actual "Hotness" of the material, well... it didn't do much for me, but I'm tough to please in that regard when dealing with fanfiction.

Don't let that get you down though. Overall, you did a nice job, one of the few lemon one-shots I can proudly say I will be favoriting. Hoping to see more, thanks for the fic.

Not bad, especially since english is not your native language. Ignore the flames, those people obviously can't read - you specifically put it in your summary AND A/N that this fic will contain futanari.

Anyways, I love how you write the lemon. It's quite beautiful, how it's about making music and all.

Overall, it's a pretty good read.

Your story contains sexually explicit material that would classify it as an "M" rating, not a "T". Please change the rating before you get reported. Thank you.