I'm really not as crazy about this episode as I was with the first one. I honestly couldn't finish this. There are a lot of issues with the plot, layout, and characterization. There's SO much dialogue. It needs more description. Secondly, His friends are your typical unlikable douche bags. Which I understand because the audience isn't supposed to like them, but they seem so cliché. And Troy blaming them shows that he's not taking responsibility for his actions that hurt Gabriella. Also, the entire plot at this point seems slightly abusive; The fact that Troy is staying home from work to keep an eye on her and keep her from contacting her friends is controlling, not romantic. I'm really surprised that her mother wasn't concerned with what Gabriella told her Troy was doing. And he's doing it gain her trust? I really don't believe that. He's just controlling her and it's not healthy at all.

Awwwwww oh my God I LOVE this! It is really, really rare for me to say something like that. I usually leave critiques, but this was very good. I was totally engulfed in the suspense. If anything, it's heavy on dialogue. I'd like more details and description. But apart from that, REALLY great work.

Really good story

Thanks!

so happy that you posted a new chapter! You didn't abandon it!

Sharpay called Gabby. They talked and it wasn't nice. She put more doubts in Gabby's mind about Troy being unfaithful to her. This made her wary of Troy's trust in their relationship.

I liked how Taylor talked to Gabby and not to believe with Sharpay said. Right now, Sharpay is not going to paint Troy in a good light. Gabby went to Troy's work. She encountered Mike. What she told him ease her mind. Troy was faithful to her when they went out.

Gabby saw the ring. She knows that Troy wanted to propose to her. Yet, not right now. They need to work on their relationship to bring them back together!

Great job!

I know sharply meant well,but the girl's got to know when she's crossed the line and when to stop. Anyway,I was so surprised when I saw you updated,thanks so much; I really enjoy your writing,I hope you continue this (if it's not done) or start a new story again...even if it's a few years in progress!

This made me cry! Great job,very well written!;)

Gwynxxxx

Awwwww plz continue this!:)

So I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I was just going back through and reading it again. I love this story. There's so much drama and different emotions that it brings up. You did a great job writing this story. I think it would be cool if you could add more to it. Maybe show how Gabriella learns to trust Troy and maybe even show him proposing to her as they continue to struggle in their relationship to get it back to what it once was.

like :)

wow i love this chapter! i'm happy that it looks like she is trying to forgive him. another chapter would be amazing!

LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

Loved this story really cute happy she started to forgive him

Thanks!

I like the real portrayal of their problems. Troy is treading very lightly around Gabby. He knows he missed up and wants to atone for his mistakes and neglected. Gabby wants to be able to forgive him, yet she is finding it hard.

Also, the advice gave by both mothers was sound and heartfelt. Gabby adhered to what her mother was saying. Troy understood his mother concerns about what he did and owning up to his mistakes.

Wonderful job!

can't blame Gabi there. Tro really fucked up. but im happy that he's trying really hard to win her over. the ending i like so much.

This is officially one of my new fav stories :D:D can't wait to read more!