| Reviews for Kushina of the Akatsuki |
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   my 2 guys chapter 1 . 1/25/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| MEGA-ULTRA-SILLY-NAME chapter 1 . 8/28/2013 :/ ummm what dafuq did i just Read :& |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 This was mind mindblowingly awesome dude keep it coming bro |
| breezly autumn chapter 1 . 5/22/2013 wow i never knew how selfish kushina can be |
| Hakkyou30 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012 hahahah! kushina done what madara could'nt and managed to take over the elemamtal naitions:-P! |
| MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 1 . 4/28/2011 ...who the hell has the Sharingan in their party/group if Itachi is dead? And where the hell was she when that was happening! You don't get to claim you are protecting you son when you either abandoned him, or just plain old wasn't ever there. And how the hell does killing the only people that can really understand his pain protect Naruto? Also, please give point of difference, otherwise I assume everything's the same as canon because nobody has told me otherwise. |
| OnewingedAngel118 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011 nice story! :) |
| Ranma2387 chapter 1 . 4/10/2011 This should be turned in to a full length story. It's to short for my tastes... plus the jutsu is call Mugen Tsukiyomi... it does cover the entire world so when you said that "the rest got away" it does not make any sense because the people who "got away" would be put under genjutsu since it does cover the intire world. Just a thought Ranma2387 |
| WindWaker94 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011 wow... just wow. ( you fail) |
| Erdreth chapter 1 . 3/27/2011 Just...just bad. I think Doom Marine has already summarized this, so... Have a good day, sir. |
| Fullmetal11791 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 Was going to write a long drawn out responce on my opinion of this chapter but doom hammer 54 has done a wonderful job conveying my thoughts exactly (in fact, I value his review much higher than the grammar or idea of this chapter.) I also would like to point out that ignoring the fact that your plot makes no sense, what were you planning to do next? Naruto having sex with anyone becides his mother would be rape, and or gay due to the fact they are mind controlled, and he only 3 who are not are men (Sakura has no breasts.) |
| anime.rules.XD chapter 1 . 3/17/2011 dude you could have made a great chapter fics with this and like added more and you got seven reviews in four days nice mine will be the eight it was good make this into a challenge or something this cool bye |
| The Critic's Review chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 If you'll wait, i'll explain why Kushina didn't jump in sooner. This was just the first chapter, i'll start to explain in the next chapter. |
| Volos chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 IDK about this. Kushina seems to know all about the life naruto lived and yet SHE didnt do anything to help him. Kushina rants about how jiraya failed and kakashi failed but hwhat about her as a mother. She been alive this whole time and didnt lift a finger to help naruto when he was crying,beaten, ect |
| UMMX chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 Nice chapter good job, I love it you do you can smut this kami right. |
