Haha this is adorable. Especially baby Caine. Great fic, loved it

TCFYGVUHBIJNOKM. I died this is the cutest shit ever!

Adorable :)

I love this it's sooo cute are you planning on another one? You could do it for different characters! Youre amazing I'm sure you could manage it!

I think I just about died of laughter.

Partly because it reminds me of something I did when I was little, but mostly because it was so adorable!

I mean. the whole argument between Caine and Diana about the horse? TOO CUTE! He wanted it for his kingdom? That was so IC, it was perfect!

And the whole ceremony was just gorgeous. I just love the thought of that being what the trio get up to in their 'time out', and Zil being there and trying to protest was so funny. I love that Drake said he was going to marry Diana when he was 'big', because look at them now.

This was so fluffy and lovely, I was smiling throughout. How do manage to keep them all in character when they're 4 years old? I envy you. xD Great job!

wow. that was the firstg time that I read something that an author wrote to try to get reviews and it actually made me review. I just couldn't not review after that logic. nice story, by the way.

good job! xcept drake is MINE :)

That was adorable! I love the part where Caine declares them boyfriend and girlfriend. I'm now smiling stupidly during my InfoTech block at school :)

xD omg thats soo funny i love it!

that was really cute and funny . hope you write more diana and drake fics.

Hehehehe, kid!Caine was so funny. As usual, you captured the characters perfectly, even in toddler form. (Was that hard to do by the way? Capturing them at a younger age without making them OC?)

Loving the snarkiness of normal Diana though.

"Who was your first love? Computer Jack?"

Drake's eyes widened in alarm, making Diana laugh. "Knew it."

I laughed SO hard at that, I could practically see it happening :)

loves and hugs!

miss-midget

heyy cuz me again:) what can i say...brill as ever!:D xx

This is AMAZING! I love the short story of the kids in GONE when they were little kids, it's so cute!

"Wait!" Caine snapped, calling the attention back to himself. "You can't interrupt!" He turned to Diana. "Do you take this man to be your awfully wedded boyfriend?"

"Sure," said Diana, shrugging. Alicia crammed a fist into her mouth in an attempt not to laugh.

"And do you take this woman to be your awfully wedded girlfriend?"

"Yeah!"

"Um, if y'wanna say something, speak now or forever hold your peas."

Zil opened his mouth. "I –"

"Shut up!" snapped Caine, pushing him over. "By the power of the vest in me, I say you're boyfriend and girlfriend. You may kiss the bribe."

Haha, love that bit! Hilarious.

You really have a talent here. You stories are funny, intresting and descriptive. Fantastic. Keep up the good work!

Personally, I thought this was great! Everyone does stuff when they are little kids that they look back on and cringe. Perfect example :) It's really sweet and I never imagined these 3 to be little kids. Yes, I've looked back to when they were at Coates and thought about what life was like but I think this is a really interesting perspective that nobody has ever really looked at before. Original, sweet and well written. What more could I ask for? :)

THIS STORY WAS ADORABLE! ahh this was so cute, it had all the characters in preschool, and with the same personalities too! Caine steeling Diana's horse for his "kingdom" and Diana smirking as she walked away, and how they agreed it never ahh the wedding vowels, this was the cutest fanfiction i have read

and have an amazing time in Rome! i wish i could go to Italy!

i know this is completed, but i think like a whole story about all the characters in preschool would be so cute