I very much enjoy your story. I've come back to it at least thrice. You've done an excellent job pulling together lots of subplots in ways that are intriguing and captivating. I love reading through and constantly guessing and predicting things then being revealed as right or wrong. It's one of the delights in reading and your story is especially good at developing those little twists and leads.

I truly enjoy the way you've been fitting the two worlds together and really like they way you've been balancing power scaling. It's all logical and I can see exactly where you're coming from.

I understand it has been years and you've likely moved on, but I want to thank you for the story you've written thus far. It is truly excellent and one of my favorites in these two fandoms.

I wish you motivation and inspiration (in all that you do)

God bless,
Glorificate

please continue the story does sakura find Naruto with these people better yet will Naruto join them? Does Sasuke end up in the same world as sakura and the others? please i want to know going to happen and i need you to continu please. I want more.

No... I'm sorry but I'm just not buying it !

So basically the bitch you made out of Sakura made fun out of Hawkeye while she should've at least felt even a little bit guilty for ruining his swordarm for unfair reasons.

Then you're like "Oh Devil Fruit have more raw strenght than chakra" but of course Magellan's poison is not strong enough to get rid of the poison for good (after a ridiculously slim chance of survival nonetheless). Like if the crippled arm wasn't enough of course.

And lastly, probably the BIGGEST insult and infuriaring thing by far... Zoro being totally fine with Sakura defeating and basically shattering his dream. Yes, shattering, because even if he "probably" would be fine with it since she's not a swordsman (she's not fighting with the same code of honor at least) she crippled Mihawk's f****** dominant arm ! If you've actually watched/read One Piece do you actually think he would be ACTUALLY fine defeating Mihawk like that ?

Sorry but no you're going to far and I don't care if you say : "Oh you know it's just a narrative tool to make her look like a threa- NO ! In One Piece Mihawk and later Crocodile destroyed Zoro and Luffy in their first fights but not to the point of giving them one handicap FOR F****** LIFE (let alone two)! And they're not less terrifying whatsoever !

So yeah I'm sorry but just this was too much. Just because of ONE mistake. I'll still read a little more to see if MAYBE you're gonna backtrack and make Vegapunk heal Mihawk completely or sth but not more than one or two chapters.

Now... I'm taking a break in my reading to leave a "little" review.

First the powerscaling doesn't bother me that much. By the end of Naruto everybody, including, Sakura is godlike. Not as godlike as Naruto/Sasuke with their Six Paths power up or Juubi's jinchuuriki or Kaguya but by OP's standards they're godlike. Since the characters are in twenties then they're comparable to pre Six Paths power so it fits.

Thus I'm not against a Sakura on par with Hawkeye especially with the "surprise" effect and the unfair tactics/advantages... BUT !

It's one thing to make her beat him. It's completely an other thing make him, apparently die or lose the capacity to use his right arm ! He's not even a bad person and you made Sakura seems like she doesn't kill corrupted, terrible people. That went definitely too far especially since you basically ruined Zoro's dream right there...

So hopefully for you he will not only survive but he will have a fixed right arm by the time we see him again you son of a f****** b**** !

End of the rant... Seriously I hope he's alright because honestly without the story would've been so good so far. And fanfic or not there's no point making a crippled man out of Hawkeye.

Bye !

i'm crying bloody tears right now.. this needs to be updated
i'm about to reread this fic for who know how many now
i've been following this fic since you last updated and waiting with hope that you're going to update
it's been 7 years!

anyway rereading it now..

what a sliced open stomach and being at the mercy of don krieg of all people isnt life or death enough for her to activate the instant healing? that seems to be a very stupid mindset for a ninja. you know, the cheating to win ist still winning kind of ninja they were in the show?

the biggest "problem" i have with this fight, is that you gave sakura a completely new moveset.

e. g. naruto in the show learned to use shadow clones and the rasengan and improved those skills over the show, sasuke had the chidori (or lightning style) and his sharingan and improved them till the end and sakura had weaponless superstrength and her healing.

now her progression in this fanfiction goes to water style, genjutsu and weapon use, almost disregarding her healing ability. she could heal any wound within a short span of time in the show (if i remember correctly) but she doesnt use it here at all. it makes your sakura seem very different from the one in the show and her progression somewhat random. not a bad thing nessesarily, just an observation to explain the "sakura hating"

enjoyed the chapter by the way, keep up the good work : )

Please continue this is like the tenth time or more reading this fanfiction and it is brilliant, also I think all seer is either kakashi or neji and lady luck could be tenten or ino

lo estoy volviendo a leer y déjame decirte que estoy gritando de la emoción KAAAAAAAAAAAAAJJAJSJSJSJDKNGFSFJG!
Me encanta tu manera de narrar la historia, por favor sigue escribiendo, este fic me atrapó con su primer capítulo
Saludos desde Perú!
PSDT: Este comentario iba ser del primer capítulo, pero como ya había sido escrito un comentario mío entonces decidí publicarlo aquí c:

Are you never gonna update ? Pleasee?

Why did you stop?It is brilliant! It is one of the few stories I read this far which was well written, has a good plot, the characters have good reasons why they do what they do and the story makes sense and is logical. I love it! I understand that some of them (Sakura) act different or have different weapons as we know they are and have because they went through a war and so they had to change, had to become stronger than they were to survive. I would have like to see how strong Hinata became and I would have like to see Kiba and Ino too. Maybe you write more in the future if you saw this story and have more ideas again. I would enjoy that.

Don't know about anyone else, but the name gave me nothing about Shikamaru's identity. It was all his mannerisms. Which were conveyed gloriously by the way. And I truly enjoyed being able to guess at his identity from context clues and the like. It made me very happy.

Vice-Admiral Aran is Shikamaru isn't he.

This is one awesome crossover. I absolutely love how this story is going so far. It totally makes sense to me and that’s what amazes me the most. I don’t know how you came up with this whole plot but you’re doing an incredible job here. Really, I appreciate all your work! I love the differences you’ve made in Sakuras fighting style with the twin tantos as well as the addition of Samehada. Everyone is incredibly in-character, aside from maybe Sasuke. If only for a bit. Also, I LOVE how clueless I am throughout your story, I was so hyper when you first introduced Vice Admiral Aran, I thought he’d be an OC character from the OP-verse, so imagine my shock when the awesome character came out to be my fav chara Shikamaru xD I have to admit I felt like such a fool, it never dawned to me that it could be him. And when I found out, I went back to the first time he made a cameo and reread the whole scene.
NICE. Further, the Naruto characters all have different roles, but every one of them has such an important role in forming the story, it‘s AWESOME really. I‘m so glad I found this story, it was super entertaining to see my top two anime in a complicated action-filled story like yours.
The OP-characters are so in-chara as well. I love how Luffy keeps calling Sakura ‚Nee-chan‘. Their relationship is so cute! Nami is also one of my fav chara and she‘s awesome in your fic too, great! The idea with the tattoo spreading their ‘code’ is brilliant too xD
I really hope you‘ll at least finish the Alabasta arc, I‘ll be waiting patiently even if it might take years for another update. Thanks for all these incredible chapters so far!
Bye~ Ame

Okay, this story was an entertaining read but there is 1 complaint I have and it's the fact that you succeeded in turning Sakura into the biggest bitch I've ever seen and that's saying something, considering that a lot of people hate her in Canon Naruto and Shippuden.

To explain, like the scene where Sakura acts extremely smug with the way she threatened smoker or when Sakura literally shreds half of Alvidas face JUST BECAUSE she called her "pinky" and Sakura even grinned when she used Samehada on Alvida which further confirmed what I already suspected about her in this fanfic. Not even Canon Sakura is that cold, I get the impression that Sakura in this fanfic, for the most part, is an unsympathetic piece of shit.

I felt very irritated and even somewhat pissed towards Sakura's shitty attitude in this story.

An interesting concept you've got here but Sakura was not a likable character in this story for me at all, I can only hope that if you ever do update again, you'll have Alvida meeting Naruto in Impel Down where he'll possibly heal her face and I also wonder if Shanks will get pissed at Sakura when he finds out that she killed Buggy, his former crew mate.