i like this thank you author thank you

O thank you for updating this, it's the best bioshock fic I've ever found! Glad to see it isn't dead :) Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it happens x

Oh, wow, this is one incredibly interesting story. I mean, I'm one of those people who liked the hell out of Atlas and were terribly disappointed after it turned out he wasn't real (then again, I liked Fontaine too, so).
There is so much aspects of this story that make it great: inclusion of Bioshock 2 characters, Jack's POV that makes him actually human and relatable, the sheer amount of detail and thought put into every scene and background - it's amazing. Btw, the first time I saw that portrait in Fontaine's place my thought's were "Isn't that Tenenbaum? And does it mean the boy's Jack?!" too, but even if Atlas didn't recognize her completely, shouldn't he at least know /of/ her, as well as Sofia Lamb? I mean, their portraits were all over some of the locations, "Rapture's Best and Brightest" or something like that. Then again, it's your story, so.
Will be waiting for the update, sincerely hope it won't take you another year. I mean, well... please.

Delighted to see an update-especially one that includes Sinclair! O:
Definitely continuing enjoying this story and awaiting patiently for the next chapter. :)

I hope there will be a lot Atlas/Fontain moments, something aboud how you write them together is just really awesome.

This is the previous reviewer, Rae. I officially created an account... a few months ago, I think.

I was a bit surprised by the new chapter, but definitely enjoyed reading it and the first chapters again.

Being busy is understandable; schoolwork is undoubtedly a priority over writing fanfic. xD

This wasn't much of a review, but... Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Good chapter. Glad to see you back.

This chapter is brilliant! I feel really sorry for Atlas, he sounds so lonely :( And it hurts when Jack thinks back over his memories...

Can't wait for the next one! :) x

Great plot, boyo. I have to say, I did eat up everything Atlas was saying up until the big twist. And what a twist it was! I'm replaying the game and I can't really help but LIKE Atlas all over again. I think it's the accent. I also love how we get to be inside Jack's head for a little while. He seems nice.

Anyway, the plot's great, the character's are in place, the splicer's dialogue is great... I really hope you update soon.

Very well written. The sparseness of the details really rounds it out. Supplies a healthy dose of the 'Atlas is not Fontaine' fan theory without becoming too sappy or deploring. Can't wait for the next part.

-Satu

You my friend, have a real gift for writing. The way you write in the present tense is awe inspiring :)

I really love this 3 I do hope you update this story, I am very much a fan.

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Yay! I first thought this story wouldnt be updated. But my fears are gone. Well i dont have much to say other than i cant wait to read more!

I see. Hmm im trying to remember why i wanted to read this story. . . I guess i can read the summary again. But that takes to long to do. . . Great chapter please update soon!

For some reason the last time i read this chapter i stopped rading after atlas first saw fontaine. . . Hmm. I loves this soooo much! I see there are only three chapters up now. . . I hope a new chapter is up before i read the third one!

Great story