I think you should continue this fanfiction. it has a very great start, and a excellent plot. I personally think you should have her try contests (seen how they don't have those in unova). don't let me down and do not stop here there is so much potential in this story.

That's was soo romantic I love it great story!;)

Is there going to be more? I love it!1

cccoooolllll! u should rite more chapters! dis is one of the best fanfics ive red! dont judge my gramer im lazy!

Love the story, Hope you'll update the story... ASAP!

Waaaah so cute! Your writing is amazing:)

Superb! I love your creativity!

SO CUTE OMG

I just read a story that exploded my head in cuteness but I think my whole body is gonna incinerate in cuteness. *-* Favorite part was the whole he loves you/he loves you not thing. I was actually expecting N to be waiting on the harbor the whole time and getting frozen. Then when Touko comes, she has to use an ice heal potion or a full heal, lol.

Only thing I'd say is that you have a bunch of run ons and Id prefer fullstops rather than semicolons, but you're the author. Make more! :D

~Rina-chan (anime-heroine)

Wow! I really liked your story, it had a really good writing style, too. Its great to see N and Touko together, that never hurts, lol. I love the idea of Touko growing as person alongside N when traveling to other regions. Again, great story!

*squeals* this is awesome! Great job!

This ending is romantic, when I read the part when both of them kiss my heart feels warm. You should write part 2 of the story where Touko and N travel to Sinnoh together please.

FerrisWheelShipping is adorable! I love this fic, I can't believe you only have one review so far (well, 2 now XD)! I thought that N in the game was a bit of a weirdo at first, but I loved him after the ending! FerrisWheelShipping FTW!

epicness

That was so cute! They have also grown to like the couple as well.

The ending was just adorable. This made me smile