| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Shinobi of the Leaf |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 Wtf? And read your other story to figure out characters? Fuck that shit. |
| Alek chapter 1 . 1/4/2013 Good so far, other than a few grammatical errors. |
 Lman3 chapter 24 . 10/14/2012 I apologize for the groin joke/grammar joke thing earlier I didn't realize that English wasn't your first language |
| Lman3 chapter 4 . 10/14/2012 "Come on lets go our classes." And with a groin they left for Potions. I would hope that they have a groin, things could get complicated without one :P. (30th line) |
| Safiiri chapter 30 . 11/16/2011 A truly wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it :) |
| ketsuekilover chapter 30 . 7/27/2011 It was good but you have some errors. There was wording errors as well as choosing the correct form of words and spelling. But all in all it was awesome to read. |
| theInsaneArtist chapter 17 . 7/19/2011 ""...Wolf's are loners and can take care of themselves, while lynx's, cats, like to be in company. So you have also a bit different personality." " ...That doesn't make sense. Wolves are extremely social creatures. Lone wolves don't live very long unless they can find a pack to join. Unless you are reffering to southern wolves who can be found alone or in pairs. Lynxes are loner animals, prefering to stay on their own unless it's time to mate or it's a female raising young. Occasionally small groups will travel and hunt together, but you are most likely to find one on its own. Cats are not a social species, though some can be more friendly than others. Anyways, the story is nice so far. A little fast paced and needs a lot of proofreading, but it's solid enough. There have been some OOC moments and for awhile I feared Star Lynx and Moon Wolf would turn into 'Mary Sue's, so I'm keeping an eye on them. -_- But I noticed: Why on earth would Death Eaters attack Hogwarts when Voldemort is trying to keep a low profile and keep everyone believing he is still dead? And if Umbridge is working for Voldemort, why would she tell Fudge about the attack? |
| im2lazy4aname chapter 27 . 6/22/2011 Ramen does have carrots sometimes |
| arachnidsGrip XXXXD chapter 12 . 5/4/2011 phahahahaha, High Frog. Who could that possible be looooooooool! |
| xxOchibixx chapter 30 . 4/17/2011 oh wow.. that was some ending...good job on finishing it. |
| im2lazy4aname chapter 26 . 4/15/2011 Since the imperious curse is a forbbiden spell Umbrige can be sent to azkaban or something |
| Violet Tempest chapter 22 . 4/3/2011 Great twist. You did a lot better with the tenses in this chap. Update soon, Mituski |
| Violet Tempest chapter 21 . 4/2/2011 watch your tenses. You constantly go between present tense and past tense. such as "She disappears to tell Wind Fox and then returns to her job." It should be She disappeared to tell Wind Fox and then returned to her job. Just a few errors, but I like the story. Keep going, Mituski |
| xxOchibixx chapter 21 . 4/2/2011 im getting interested on what pink toad got up her sleeves.. dam i hate her . |
| creepy-wolf chapter 21 . 4/2/2011 Nice X3 |
