| Reviews for Can You Keep a Secret? |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2019 I made it to chapter 5. Good plot, spelling is A, punctuation leaves a fair bit to be desired. The pace needs help. It seems rushed, like you're trying to get all of the ideas you have into one chapter. let the dialogue play out better, add more context. Make the story flow like a river |
fhl1234 chapter 58 . 6/6/2019 Excellent update. |
fhl1234 chapter 1 . 6/4/2019 Intriguing first chapter. |
mizzrazz72 chapter 58 . 6/2/2019 Now that Dumbledore is gone is everyone will be having their happily ever after. |
yukino76 chapter 58 . 6/1/2019 Good update thanks |
AliceCullen3 chapter 58 . 6/1/2019 LOVE IT! |
AliceCullen3 chapter 57 . 5/27/2019 LOVE IT! |
Ilamay chapter 57 . 5/27/2019 So Cute! Love it. thanks for writing it. ) |
Love Faith Embers chapter 56 . 12/3/2018 Great so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D |
sweetteatwo chapter 4 . 11/10/2018 So happy they worked it out. |
Ilamay chapter 56 . 9/2/2018 Exceeds Expectations. I like it. I feel like something is missing but not sure what? Still, looking forward to more. Thanks for writing it. ) |
DS2010 chapter 55 . 8/30/2018 had to laugh Ginny a boy... |
yukino76 chapter 56 . 8/30/2018 Good update thanks |
AliceCullen3 chapter 56 . 8/30/2018 LOVE IT! |
skyangel82 chapter 55 . 8/29/2018 Great chapter! |