Reviews for Can You Keep a Secret?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
I made it to chapter 5. Good plot, spelling is A, punctuation leaves a fair bit to be desired.
The pace needs help. It seems rushed, like you're trying to get all of the ideas you have into one chapter. let the dialogue play out better, add more context. Make the story flow like a river
fhl1234 chapter 58 . 6/6/2019
Excellent update.
fhl1234 chapter 1 . 6/4/2019
Intriguing first chapter.
mizzrazz72 chapter 58 . 6/2/2019
Now that Dumbledore is gone is everyone will be having their happily ever after.
yukino76 chapter 58 . 6/1/2019
Good update thanks
AliceCullen3 chapter 58 . 6/1/2019
LOVE IT!
AliceCullen3 chapter 57 . 5/27/2019
LOVE IT!
Ilamay chapter 57 . 5/27/2019
So Cute! Love it. thanks for writing it. )
Love Faith Embers chapter 56 . 12/3/2018
Great so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
sweetteatwo chapter 4 . 11/10/2018
So happy they worked it out.
Ilamay chapter 56 . 9/2/2018
Exceeds Expectations. I like it. I feel like something is missing but not sure what? Still, looking forward to more. Thanks for writing it. )
DS2010 chapter 55 . 8/30/2018
had to laugh Ginny a boy...
yukino76 chapter 56 . 8/30/2018
Good update thanks
AliceCullen3 chapter 56 . 8/30/2018
LOVE IT!
skyangel82 chapter 55 . 8/29/2018
Great chapter!
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