I liked this, and it was really well written in for the most part, but it was a bit hard to read in some spots. I would have helped if you had maybe put a few dividers to let the reader know that you are shifting to another scene and also some of the wording was a bit confusing as well. This is not a flame, because as I said I enjoyed the story very much, I was just offering some helpful advice.

This is so dark but yet written so well,I like it

This story was a lovely dark kind of beautiful. I enjoyed reading it very much. _

I really enjoyed the story but two parts confused me.

The first is "He can tell she is different, you define your life in the way you end it, and she is dying ever so sweetly."

Is "you define your life in the way you end it" a well-known saying? I didn't quite get the connection and why she is dying?

Also "She shuffles over to Ulquiorra as if he had already dropped her at her door. He can see it, he thinks, he is beginning to see her end, she is dying." Why she is dying? Because like you mentioned before Aizen can tell the end in the beginning and he suppose Orihime would die?

I am really confused and looking forward to your answers!

Wow...this was great! I wish I could see more!

beautiful. fragile. mysterious. i would like to say, one of the best writings here, on .

and i just adore this couple.

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! I really got this imaginary image going on in my head of Aizen,the big bad wolf preying down on Orihime, the little girl in white. XD

very interesting read. so much subtlety in his mannerisms that didn't betray his inner thoughts, & in understanding ulqui's microcosmic behaviors & their meaning (now he's subtle). i dig aihime-how alluring the innocence would be to someone like aizen. the desire to possess & corrupt would be strong, i'd imagine, especially when there's boredom or downtime from his other machinations & power plays (no cable in HM, gotta entertain yourself somehow).

This story is wonderful. Your imagery is moving and exciting. I think you did a great job of capturing Aizen and Orihime's characters and I loved the moments with Ulquiorra. The darkness of Aizen character was beautifully captured and presented. I hope you continue this story!

this was really good. Very well written and a bit dark which I loved. I hope you will continue this. :)

This is interesting. Are you going to continue it?

What a dark story but so good! I'm not one to read Aizen/Hime but this was very wonderful! If something from Orihime's perspective was made I would love to read it. Keep up the great work. :)

I also hope everyone in Japan and all the island nations are okay. I understand- I have family in Japan.

Wow. This is amazing. Really dark and powerful, and very spooky and disturbing. I normally don't like horror but this was very well done.

I liked the hints of UlquiHime in here; Ulquiorra's moments of hesitation were excellently written, as was Aizen noticing them.

The description of Aizen stabbing Momo? Wonderful in how much horror you got across in a single sentence.

Your story was hard to read but quite well written.