Hi, I was wanting to know when are you going to add the rest of the chapters.

Dang Gatekat you should put up another chapter cause this is good

Interesting take on the trope and Optimus clearly wins the 'in-characterness in an upside-down situation' contest. I'll keep reading this :)

Awww,will this story ever get a new chapter?Im in love! ;)

...I would like to see more... This story is intrigueing... I don't think I spelled that right, but whatever... More please! ;D

This is amazing. I'm a bit disappointed that it didn't get farther then 5 chapters.

But you write a lot, and i can understand how idea's just somewhat die.

I just hope that there is a possibility for more! I'm addicted and I'm reluctant to let go!

Much love:

~Animelover

This was really awesome. I love all the ritualized SpecOps traditions, and the idea of Jazz and Mirage as turned Decepticons is tasty. :D

'Prime's powerful spark invited as he opened to the saboteur with a wash of welcome, excitement, and desire to be known by someone almost strong enough to resist him and live.' - This line pretty much sums up what's so interesting about this story. I love the mix of sheer power and partially shielded vulnerability that you're writing with Prime, and the changes to his code sound interesting to say the least.

And that may have been one of the best Ironhide/Chromia exchanges I've ever read. _

ohhhhhhhh! Great chapter.

Poor Prowl. everyone always picks on him.

Very very good loved it

Another awesome chapter

AWESOME HOT and WOW it was cold in this room but damn this story made it really hot lol

OKAY that was DAMN really hot

Wow okay just find this story VERY good

Wow - this has evolved so far from where it started. I love the solid mythology that underpins it all. You both write so confidently.