Disgusting man! One of the few characters you can actually hate...

I've read something similar to this story before. Good work.

Very chilling. You kept the tension and air of menace straight through, and I liked the way you showed their life together as a continuation of that first game.

Oh goodness, creepy Gozaburo is creepy! Very creepy... This drabble caught him perfectly though. Few stories seem to write what Seto went through in a way that makes me feel sorry for him, but this one definitely managed to make me feel for the guy.

Boy, he's a real piece of work, isn't he? Knowing Kaiba's past really makes the way he behaves so much more understandable.

excelent one shot.

The characterization of Gozaburo was perfect in my opinion, despite the little we know about him.

I also like the characterization of Seto you did. How he was willing to suffer all that "training" and punishment, just for his little brother to have a better life. Or at least I think that's what you meant to explain.

Ecxelent work. keep going! :)