An interesting story. Twilight's certainly the type that would go to the trouble of doing something like that.

Since I began reading ponyfics, Trixie has quickly become one of my favorite characters. As such, I'm very excited to see where this is going to end up going.

The characterizations were very good, particularly Applejack. Of course she would feel especially strongly about Trixie, representing honesty. Twilight and Rarity were also quite in-character, and the overall plot is just sweet.

Whatever you do, don't let this fic die. I might just cry if it does.

I kept wondering if they were talking about Luna or Trixie until the teleportation.

While Trixie it was clinically proven to be a liar, and she certainly -wasn't- friendly, I felt that she was given the 'bad news' label too much from the start rather than waiting for the audience to see her sadistic side.

That being said, Twilight choosing to try and make Trixie realize that life isn't a one-pony show can indeed make sense for her character indeed.

I know I reviewed this on dA already, but there IS a detail I forgot to mention there which I may as well bring up here: NICE catch on Twilight's dress. I doubt it was intentional within the show itself, but the uncanny resemblance between it and Trixie's design is indeed notable, and I always love stories that are spun off from those little connections. _

Well. This is gonna be 3 kinds of interesting. I'm gonna keep a close eye on this one.

(Also, something I can't help but notice- you seem to have a particular affinity for Rarity- a majority of your stories involve her in a major way. Curious.)

I have a good feeling about this fic. I look forward to seeing where you take it!