That was absolutely perfect. I think you captured everything perfectly.

Ah! I loved this! I actually really liked the fact that it jumped around through the third movie. I was afraid that you weren't going to cover Adam being on Varsity at all, so when I got to those chapters, I was really excited. Awesome job.

I really enjoyed these! Especially this last chapter. It was nice to see being understanding and having a great relationship with Adam. Then him seeking out Charlie to thank him for being good to Adam was surprising and sweet.

aw! please continue i love this story

I'm really liking the writing in this one. The first two chapters really seemed to make sense. There's no problem with the continuity there, but it just seems like Chapter 2 should actually be the one that comes first, but it's not huge issue.

aah ok

It's drabbles.

I like it, hope you continue writing,

see ya

Yeah, it's not in the same continuity, but I think it's great.

I havent read third chapter yet and I have no idea if you're writing a story or just drabbles about Charlie/Adam, but if it's a story, then you could change the orders of the chapters, you know? Dont get me wrong, your story is getting great, just an a idea.

Anyway, I'm going to read next chapter!

I like it please continue.

Seems like a good story so far! Can't wait to read more!