I'm actually rooting for Edward right now. And trust me never in a million years would I ever do that. I've always been team wolf pack, especially Jacob. But right now boy is just demonstrating how much he doesn't deserve her. In fact I want her to choose Paul. He seems to care about her more than Jake does. And in one night he showed her how much better he is than Jake for her. So right now I'm Team Lahote.
Cause yeah I get that Jake was trying to get rid of the pain of nor having Bea, but using another to get ur dick wet is just sad. No matter how willing the girl is. In fact that says something about Jacob and who he associates with. If he goes around making friends with slutty girls who feed him sob stories about an abusive boyfriend and gives it away for free to an entire town then that shows just how naive he is. He isn't being sweet, he's a punk who let's himself get played.

What happens next? Do you plan on updating this story?

ooh clifffy

This Jacob is not the one in our hearts. No matter what, he should never ever do that with other woman who is not his imprint or hurt his most beloved Bells by that suffocating desperately way. What the hell this Jacob is doing? And Edward, although I always consider his love with Bella is groundless, I still don't believe he would choose such way to revenge. I am depressed.

Great chapter! Love it!

YAY! Jake finally got his head out of his butt, lol. Let's hope he doesn't do anything else stupid now :)

Please update soon! Nice cliffhanger!

good chapter

Amazing! Flat out amazing! I love your new idea! I'm so happy to hear from you again! I'm really sorry I haven't been in touch with you. I really missed you.

I'm looking forward to this new story you've created. I see a lot of potential! Good for you and keep up the great work! xox

I'm totally on Bella's side right now. If he truly loved her, after knowing how hurt she was about seeing him and Chloe together. You'd think he'd care that maybe it might hurt her to see them together period. Even if he says they're just friends. And seriously? It's his fault? Chloe sent Bella a freaking email to come. I mean, if it were me in love with Jacob... I just don't think I'd be able to handle seeing Chloe around him like that, knowing what they did. And I don't think Bella's gonna be too happy when she finds out Chloe's staying at Jacob's house. No matter the reason. Chloe is nothing but a selfish biotch who really needs to be put in her place. It's kinda obvious she's fake. Jacob is being really stupid. I know he loves Bella okay, but to me it seems like he's going out of his way to make Chloe happy and make sure she's safe or whatnot. I mean, Bella is still a virgin and I can see that it seems like to me, she might have been holding out for him. But yet he wanted to forget the pain or whatever like a coward and look where that got him. He lost his V-Chip to a hoe and Bella saw the whole thing because said hoe wanted her too.

So is this it's own story? Or is it something else? Because the title says

"Payback of Enlightenment chapter" and that chapter kind of throws me off...is there something that we missed reading? I don't understand.

Awesome! Love it! Oooo I wonder what Chloe has up her sleeve and how Paul will react to her staying at Jakes...

good chapter

Seriously? Bella TOLD him about the freaking email and he STILL doesn't believe Chloe did anything wrong? How stupid can Jake BE? He acts as if Chloe can do no wrong and everyone else are liars. He's known them all forever and yet believes a hoe bag over them all even Bella? I really don't understand it. And rather then all the wolves being there for Jake because he was stupid. Couldn't some of them be there on Bella's side of it? I mean, imprint or not, his reasons don't justify his actions.

good chapter