| Reviews for A Killing Business |
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  Cheryl leggans chapter 15 . 11/29/2015 Good story |
 polarpi chapter 15 . 5/26/2011 Great job, friend! Looking forward to the next installment! :) |
| ashamedofthepast chapter 13 . 5/7/2011 It's going strong so far. I'll patiently wait for the next chapter. :) Keep up the good writing! |
| polarpi chapter 11 . 4/20/2011 Still very intrigued with the story - didn't expect Bethany to return (I thought this was a flashback for some of the chapter :)) looking forward to see what happens next! |
| gunslinger01 chapter 9 . 4/5/2011 Build-up & attention to details from beginning till now is excellent |
| polarpi chapter 7 . 3/29/2011 Looking forward to reading what happens next - keep up the fantastic work! :) |
| mmkfire chapter 7 . 3/28/2011 i love the story so far. keep up the great writing. michelle |
| polarpi chapter 6 . 3/23/2011 Can't wait to see what goes down next - keep up the great work! :) |
| Strapakai chapter 5 . 3/18/2011 I really like how you personalize Tracy and explained her motivations. I feel like I could care for what happens to her. In fic, we usually don't give any quality time the bad guy, making stories one dimensional. |
| Katrinka the Great chapter 3 . 3/17/2011 Very good, keep updating please. |
| Strapakai chapter 3 . 3/13/2011 The barn sound really cool. I am not too sure about the recruiting technique. Wondering what he did to think he'll be taken off to the stockade. I am looking forward to more. |
| Strapakai chapter 2 . 3/11/2011 This chapter has kept my interest. I do wonder what the Joe's see in Alex. I hope you explore that in your next chapter. |
| polarpi chapter 2 . 3/9/2011 Looking great so far - glad to see you back here! :) |
| willwrite4fics chapter 2 . 3/9/2011 Without all the "dude" it's easier. When one guy says it a lot, it's a character though. It's just when everyone starts using it that it's irksome. Also, describing the outfits of each girl seemed to serve no real purpose and distracts from the action, esp when you describe each item of clothing all in a row like that. It's shaping up to be a very involved story and it's well written. You're right that chap 1 is slow, but most set ups are necasary, you can't always leap into some sort of action. As long as you can come up with some plausible reason that a reservist is going to "lead" a Joe team, it sounds like a fascinating story beginning. Looking forward to more. |
| Strapakai chapter 1 . 3/9/2011 Great start. I want to get to know Alex more. Suspicious bank. I'd just lay off the Dudes a bit. For me, they get annoying quick. However, you got me hooked. I want more. |
