god finally! i thought i was the only one who find this pairing interesting! i think Amane and Shizuma would be a really sexy pairing...Marvelous story by the way!

I wish you could write more about this!

I like your story...and the pairing. Can't understand why it isn't chosen more often. But I have trouble imagining Amane and Shizuma together for longer than a one-shot. It would really have to develop slowly.

I'm working on a story, "Pickup Party". There's a Shizuma-Amane chapter in it, maybe you'd like to read it...

y is this the only fan fic of them? ( but it is a good fanfic. 3

~Woot!

Apart from your awesome grammar... I so fucking love it!

It may not be romance, but this sure is one fucking hell of an amazing story!

Though, I'd be so glad if you'd continue...

It just doesn't seem right for this to end this way!

Nice Job with the characters, and story, of course, though I'm really not fond of them, I still like the story.

Infinity High! Move on!

~kaizer20

A really hot story by an author who knows what they're doing. Great Job all around! XD

I am torn.

Really.

I don't know if I must just yell at you or, on the contrary cheer you.

I'll choose the latter.

I LOVE the way you wrote Shizuma. I've read a part of the manga and I know she's more "joyful" if I may say than in the anime and your writing fits her totally, I just love it, this nonchalance almost presumptuous she has while doing such a thing. Tigress. Totally her. For that I'll thank you.

Now about Amane, she's at the same time very OOC and IC. That's a strange feeling.

By the way thumbs up for the alliterations! Good, very good.

The only thing that has me cringe and thus not totally enjoy the chapter might be the lemon, or rather the terms you use I don't know, it seems (for me) a little crude in fact, it doesn't suit Shizuma. I think you could do better for that, turn it into a very tasteful lemon, explicit enough to be considered as such but at the same time elusive to let the reader's imagination works on its own. . I'm picky am I not? I know how it's hard to write a scene like this. Mhm that's all I think.

No one to write more about this pairing bcoz no one wants to see Amane with anyone. Now tht i think about it, Shizuma with Amane looks more like a hetero pairing.

Anyways good story, a nice read. Very hawt.