I don't see it as a sad ending. Only because of being deaf I see it, but I don't see it as gross or sad, no I see it as awesome and only on rare adhesion as sad

Alrighty. Update soon."

Critiques:

1.) your OC is TOO powerful.
2.) that potion came it of nowhere-

Ka li gauna za vo,
Talia-Elizabeth.

Ummm...a few questions.

1.) what on earth is a "hookup"?
2.) you have him offering to teach her ASL but they seem to be communicating in practically fluent sign language, what gives?
3.) where are Ron and Hermione? They've BARELY been mentioned!
4.) why is Linda so über-powerful. She' an OC, that's called making her a bit of a Mary-Sue.

No offense,
I like the sort it's just confusing.

Ka li gauna za vo,
Talia-Elizabeth.

What I don't understand is why we(as authors) base charecter name off kf trsits(personality wise.) because HOW do their parents know what their child will be like?
You could go off genetics but somewhere along the line you will get the person who BASICALLY rejects the ideas taught to them. Or who just doesn't listen.[it HAPPENS.]

Just saying.

Kaia gauna za vo,
Talia-Elizabeth.

Please please please continue this! I hope this story isn't abandoned.

loving this story don't tend to like oc but loving linda

vary good

I really like this story! I'm shocked you haven't gotten as many reviews as you deserve. I hope you countine writing this story. I think it is amazing already but I think it would be a bit better with a few things.

First, your OC Linda is fantastic but I think she needs a bit more information to go with her. I think you should start adding more information about her past and her family. You have a wonderful base and some information but I think it would be even more interesting with more information.

Second, I think that Harry should ecounter some challanges with his new hearing ability. Its seems like he isn't having any problems and can speak perfectly after not being able to hear his whole life. I think your next chapter should involve him having a problem on his newfound ability. It doesn't even have to be the focus of the next chapter, just a problem he faced. Its seems unrealistic for him not to have any problems.

But I do really like this story and I really hope you countine it. I also hope I didn't sound to harsh with the feedback/tips. I don't want to make you mad or make you feel like not writing again. As I've said before, I really do love this story, it is written well and has interesting characters/plot.

Waiting for the next chapter,

Not-Different-Just-Me

P.S. Sorry for such bad spelling and grammer, I'm writing this on my ipod and it is hard to see the mistakes.

I LOVED that episode! I was surprised about the killer!