Red raven, if that’s the name of the guest who left some rude comments, if you hate it so much, then rewrite it how you would like it put that out, give credit to the original author of this story, and then see who’s better

Fuck your story!

Cool, it appears that I've found a new interesting story!

why...
why is mary the traitor

Isn’t Percy’s eyes sea green? I am a bit confused...But the imagination is terrific though.

I kid you not, this is the best fanfic I have ever read thus far. The plot was amazing, and I normally don’t like OCs, but you hit the juicy parts right in this fanfic. Like, my gosh, Calli seems wicked cool. Some typos here and there, also there were commas where commas shouldn’t go and no commas where commas should go, you following? Some OOCness, but you gotta love it being a little OOC, for this is a really good fanfic. I hope you finish your sequel when you have the time, because I (I don’t mean to rush you into or frenzy or anything) really want more, and that’s saying something. Beautiful masterpiece here!

Well, the prophecy was only 75 years old.

FUCKIN SHIT KILL IAN RIGHT NOW OR ELSE! AND KILL WHATEVER’S GOTTEN TO ANNABITCH. Good day!

grilled chesse

YES PANIC! AT THE DISCO IS MY JAMMMMM

the Old English is incorrect

Not important but the god is Janus not jarus

Oh mayday parade

Too uch swearing for the characters and Percy sounds more British than American. These characters are too OOC for this to be a regular AU dumbass ffs, update your description so that you don't lead readers on you bloody idiot

I might stop reading cuz it's Percabeth (put that in the description cuz I hate that ship with my entire being and Idgaf if it's canon) but eh, this isn't complete shit.