I'm so glad Vilinye recommended this on her blog. Every time I come to a story of yours, I know I'll love it. I heard Wilf's voice in every one of his lines.

I love Wilf, I really do, and a photo album like that would be absolutely amazing

Just to let you know, I can totally imagine this scene as being actually part of an episode, somewhere. You described it so well, I could actually SEE Wilf, Donna, and the Doctor, sitting on a blanket, laughing over a good jokee

And you said your character!death fics are better.

You mentioned bananas! Again! That made me happy. *is in love with bananas*

And yes, the ending was a little bit pushed, but there wasn't much you could do with that. You had to find a way to MAKE them leave, and Sylvia was the best way to make that happen. Anyway, Keep writing! :{D

Yeah, to be honest, the last scene did feel a bit forced. However, as the story as a whole was utterly incredible and heartwarming and full of the awesomeness that is Wilf, I forgive you for that. Just a wonderful story, and the idea of Wilf getting a trip that DOESN'T involve anti-missile turrets is a really sweet, fun idea.

Not bad. Personally I thought the ending was perfectly adequite all things condsidered.

But yeah, you gotta love Wilf; he's just a big kid who needs his bedpan changed.