You have to work on your commas and spelling. Ex. It's "go through", not "go threw".

I saw Goku kiss Chi-Chi. And I be like, "This Goku is OOC"

trucks?

And this folks is how Bulla was made!

Yo, Videl calls herself a hoe when she means how in the sentence after being told by gohan that he would be asked to spar in the future from Vegeta.
I can tell this is super late since your like 24 chapters ahead and probably done but I think yall can agree with me that this sentence was funny to read.
Its only typo, thanks for the fangic!

Gonna re-read this again , don’t remember what it was about just remembered it was really good haha

I just read your author note and thats wack. This isnt boring! I have been laughing my ass off so far and I am happy to see that there are many more chapters!

The Master RossiGoten part was pure humor. Well written

Now I remember this story. One of my all-time favorites.

Good thing mothers never actually do things like this with their sons girlfriends they would think it helps but it would sabotage it and it's intrusive no less.

Well it's obvious that romance fics all share one thing. People who are not involved try to force people together. IRL if someone did that they're likely to get hit or screamed at maybe both.

I usually don’t like stories that go off the deep end, but you went so far off you went around the globe and landed in the shadows

Any plans with chichi in it is just really annoying.

Don't put AN in the middle of the story. This is especially egregious when it is in bold, and says nothing but squee.

I'm sooo glad I found this. I absolutely love these kinds of stories, but usually most people discontinue them after a few chapters. But not only does this have 33 chapters, AND a sequel it seems really well written so far. I can't wait to really get into it :)