Poor Joey. The angst he feels hurts me.

Love this fic this is the second time I've read it but I can feel his hurt.

Can I translate your fanfiction in french? I'll credit you

Omg this story was soooooo good I loved it so much (loved the ending).

I wasn't planning on writing a review Intel I read the whole story but Joey's answers to the news people questions had me laughing to much (so I had to write an review before the end because of that)

This is sad:(

Mrs. Wheeler brought flowers for her ex!? I knew something was wrong! she blames Joey for changing her ex and that he ruined everything!? That witch, he was an jerk before Joey ever existed, when his mom was pregnant he wanted to throw her down the stairs to make her lose the pregnancy! He never loved her,he wanted her for sex, and she chooses him over Joey and Serenity who never asked to be born! I hope she pays for it in another fic.

Great chapter! How dare Mrs. Wheeler show up with flowers when she knew what she did and that she knew what her ex did to Joey! She did nothing but hurt him, critisize him and left him to die and hurting Serenity in the process! She doesn't love her kids, she wants to play the good guy so the media won;t know she is also bad like her ex! Your lies won;t work this time mrs. Wheeler, you lost your kids forever!

Yay! Serenity's coming back! And she was grounded for having an 87 in gym!? That's still an A! her mother is never happy with anything! She scolds Joey for not doing good in school and yet she punishes Serenity and takes everything away from her when she still has a good grade!? This woman has serious issues! I'm glad Serenity said she was leaving home to be with Joey, their mother is horrible and is worse than her ex husband!

This was so sad and beautiful! Joey's PTSD and memories were so horrible and the memories of his parents, including in the present time, was painful. Poor Joey, and their mother grounding Serenity for having an 87 in Gym!? At least she is keeping up with her grades! You don't punish kids for that especially when they are doing well! I'm glad Serenity left her mom here and there.

And when she brought those flowers in and saying she will be Joey's guardian made me sick! And when Mokuba and Bakura said those flowers were for her ex husband and that she never wanted Joey and wanted Serenity as her only child and be with her 'beloved' I hope she lost her parental rights after that because she doesn't deserve to be a mother, especially when she did nothing but yell at Joey for his 'bad behavior and grades' when her and her husband are the reason he is acting out and doing bad in school while they treat Serenity like a princess.

Great story!

Nice fic i really loved it

the Kaiba corp sounds like youtube hq in California. ive been there, they have a slide that goes down 3 floors. and an indoor mini golf cores. my friend works there.

We never found out what the blank card in Joeys deck did.

I like the way this story is going:)

Joey s life is fucked up! I hope this angst ends soon, I want to find the comfort in hurt /comfort

That was such a good chapter. That kiss was kind of a reward, after reading all that intellectual banter (lol)! Not that the banter isn't nice to read. It sounds like the kind of thing that Joey and Seto would talk about if they were to warm up to each other in a realistic relationship.

I'm loving all the buildup! So happy I'm only halfway through the fic! I never want it to end...

-Milly

Lol, I'm sorry, but I'm just thinking how hilarious it is that you were saying that 200 is ridiculous for a phone, and yet the most recent iphone and galaxy phones are like over 600 each and people are buying them like crazy...lol? although, I would have to agree, a couple hundred dollars for a phone is wtf