AB negative isn’t rare; O negative is

And once again, the lead male character, in this story, Peter, is an immature, insecure wanker. One minute he's all about how much he loves Bella, the next, he treats her like she is beneath him and owes him a blow job because she did something he didn't approve of. Bella should tell him to hit the gravel and travel instead of putting up with the "possessive, jealous" moron.

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It genuinely took me ages to finish this. Like dead serious, years! I’m in love with your writing, I’m happy you share your creative imagination with us :/ I’m sad it’s over

EWWW! EWWW! EWWW! HERMOSA AND BILLY BLACK! EWWW! EWWW!

You kinda said that backward. it should be if anyone can turn a gay man straight

Are you serious!? His pee-pee!? Hahahahahaha

Def Leppard on a Trans -am Most definitely!

Yeahhhhhhh this fic was bloody brilliant right up untill the end, then it was positively shit. Honestly fantastic writer, great character development, funny as all hell and unique plotline. The ending tho just did not do it for me, I dont like all human endings I dont see the point personally. I wouldnt read twilight based stuff if I wanted them all to be human. Anyway that's just my opinion and dont be to sound like to much of a dick, other than that great work and much love!

Great story made me laugh and cry xxx

I think Peter needs to fuck the fuck off in this chapter. Seriously grow the hell up Peter your how old!? Obviously bella cant help that's shes got allure as a gift, although granted, I dont think she should have used it without training as it's so powerful. Ultimately tho I was getting major controlling dick vibes from him in this chap. Aside from that another great chapter!

Awww (sniffle, sniffle) bless charlie heart. He surely will protect his ever growing brood.

Bro I am enjoying this shit! I am loving this! This chapter was funny

Man! I am lovin’ this shit! This is ta stories tat I love

Hello, I need some help/ information, I went to Wal-Mart looking for a vampire. Male or female eather or is cool. But I REALLY need a vampire to change me into one, so I can go live in a van. Thank you in Advance.