Please improve your grammar... It's abysmal.

Ya, I'm stopping here the first sentence made me feel like I had a stroke while reading.

I'm going to be completely honest here I can't bring myself to read this. It's not the concept; it's your use of the English language. If it does not get better I'm going to stop reading but until then...

Nice story and all. Really good job but the way I see it there was no reason for naruto to accept Yamamoto order to fight his own wife.
Naruto is strong enough to blow soul society up Yamamoto himself known this.
Yet he was able to make naruto try to kill his wife.
I say major bullshit, but still it was a good fight

The story is fine but I really think you’re nerfing Naruto. Like, a lot. First is him actually being damaged by the lower ranked hollows and similar; in Bleach, his spiritual pressure would straight up make them incapable of cutting his skin, and his daughter is only a lieutenant, even the average fraccion is meant to be stronger that her. Even if you said repeatedly he was holding back a lot, it still doesn’t make it up. He’s zero Espada, several times stronger that Ulquiorra at 4th, yet in the anime Ichigo couldnt even touch him until much later in the series, and even then only after loosing control of his hollow; on the other hand, Ichigo also beat multiple lieutenants in seconds without even using bankai, and this was right at the beginning during the Rukia extraction. And you’re not using any of the actual Bleach powers and such, I know fanfic gives you the right to change it up a bit but you’re practically ignoring the source material.
It was a good idea with potential but could have been better

Well this was a great fight shame it's not been updated in years such a great story, as for the child I'm not sure Grimmjow maybe

Well that was interesting kind of figured it would be Unohana but I must say what about Tia

Well that surely was entertaining so much drama

Well that was amusing I wonder if he will meet his parents

Well that was a great fight still shocked with Retsu being his wife but whatever great fight and Dark Hado seriously that's awesome going Street Fighter there huh

Well that was interesting but seriously his wife and lover was Retsu Unohana are u fucking kidding me not that she ain't attractive and all by WTF, well whatever wonder how this fight will go

Well that was interesting a nice lemon for those 3 I'm guessing his lover was Sakura we know it's not Hinata still this is getting interesting

Well that was interesting that monstrosity met it's match cool beast though

Well that was amusing Naruto killed that schmuck Naruto is weird is it just flirting or does he want to fuck Mla, Apacci and Sung-Sun either way is fine if Tia allows it of course

Well that was amusing strip poker aye nice and using the sexy jutsu huh shame on Naruto and Ulquiorra met Rangiku huh I wonder if she will tel Minato and Kushina about him being a hollow even if he's more human now and lastly Nnoitra as a female ha that's awesome don't care about Szayel. Look forward to the reunion