...This was a *little* mushy. And it seems weird that the Major could turn psycho so quickly, and just as quickly turn good (or at least remorseful) again. But the emotions expressed seem true to the show, with Doof and Perry having a love-hate relationship, and Perry also caring fiercely for the boys.

Innocent evil scientists? That seems like a bit of an oxymoron to me...

that was the most bloody yet heart warming story ever i am amazed u are an astonishing author

Oh. My. Inators.

You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. You perfectly captured Doof's and Perry's feelings. Your writing was clear, precise, intense, and beautiful, all at once. And Phineas and Ferb actually BROUGHT DOOF BACK FROM THE DEAD?! I'll be honest, as soon as Doof died, I thought the whole revival scene was gonna suck. But you pulled it off dazzlingly!

This is definitely in my top 10 P&F fics ever. Well done.

I love it!

Yeah, I would change the rating to T...

Are you doing a sequel for this because i would recommend doing one like what happensd next after all this or something because i loved this series

Wow! Already finished reading all chapters, so there's one word to describe the story: AWESOME. It really shows the Perry and Doof frenemyship. Good job! (some parts almost made me cry...TT)

Sad :( this is a sad story but it is really good :P

Aww! This story was SO amazing and heart felt, that I almost cried. It literally kept me on my toes and made me have a shortness of breath durning some parts! This story was so intriguing, that I read it all in one day, I didn't take a break..well except when my dad needed me to do stuff and eat. Oh, and speaking of breaks, I need a bathroom break! -runs to the bathroom- oh, yea, -comes back- great story, favorited and followed. Bye now! -runs off to the bathroom without another word-

ok, I do not speak English, I'm writing this with the google translator, I hope you understand.

good story, too good, you made me laugh and mourn, but mourn over, I never cry at the tragedy, so this is very well written to make me mourn much.

Added to my favorite

author to my favorites.

this was actually a gud story :) im suprised u dont have like 300 reviews D:

Good story, Monogram and the other agents are becoming the very thing they swaered to stop, if they go though this, the other should see it that way. Poor Perry

And it made me cry too! Good thing everyone was asleep when I read this . ;)

WOW! Great story! I spent HOURS reading this! I'm in China right now and the time is, like, 5:40 AM! Again, Great Story!