I think the rating needs to be changed to T. But it's a cute story.

real talk: i just finished an M-rated fanfic, and i just need fluff. but i will review, bc you worked on this. i will prob skip the m-parts.

This is a very beautiful SyaoSaku love story. They met beautifully... In a unique beautiful way! Unfortunately, the last chapter was a big dissapointment. They deserve a wedding, and even one date as official couple. Their kissing scene wasn't beautiful at all, it was honestly disgusting, you've wasted time describing how Sakura stinks and that's gross! The dream confession and the kiss in the car was so much better but it also turned out to be another disappointment because it was just a stupid dream. You've, once again, wasted time and put so much effort in writing that irrelevant dream but you didn't even put effort in writing the proposal scene, making it an another irrelevant thing. UNBELIEVABLE. You should have at least shown us their wedding. They didn't really spend time together as official couple even once. It was rush and the ending was nothing but a narration. It was an obvious lazy ending. The most pathetic ending I've ever read. You've narrated everything, as in the whole ending, even the proposal. Proposal is a very important part of romance or love story. It shouldn't be just a narration. In story, SHOWING IS MUCH MORE IMPORTANT THAN TELLING. Syaoran and Sakura deserve better. Plus, another stupid thing is that you've rated it as M but there's not even lime in it. lol. If they made love inside that theater it would have been better.

what the!-!? and yet, there was already the possiblity of ending it this way, just like the general atmosphere of the whole story- brief and concise. :D

thnks for sharing. Brava.

the characterizations are entirely awesome and beautiful. a thousand 'thumbs-up' for this work.

salud

this is absolutely beautiful. :)

Wow. This is too engrossing. I cant help but continue on.

Wow, this is one of the most beautiful and romantic fanfics I have ever read. It's really amazing.

Great ground story. Ending was rushed and disatisfyin tho

I read it and then started again from the beginning.

The first several chapters of this story was absolutely amazing and seemed to be building up to a fantastic ending, but then it seemed like you were rushing to finish. Hopefully you can redo this story and put in as much creativity in the ending as you did starting out. Otherwise, this fanfic was great and very cute.

He's so awkward! _

hmmhmm..
i like this story.
too bad you didn't give an explanation why sakura are too.. paranoid about relationship.
her hesitate was too odd. hahaha
as for the conflict, if you ever decide to write something like this again..
give more conflict.
what i see is the conflict comes from around syaoran and sakura.
even though there are many possible rivals..

too bad. but what's done is done.
so...

oya! you need to make a concrete line in each scene.
sometimes, i'm getting confused when you just change the scene 'abruptly' without proper sentence.
just a comment. oya! this is CLEARLY rated T, not M. there's no sexual things inside beside kissing.

until next time,

mrs. zala

you know what? when i first reading the summary, i thought sakura is a ghost.
hahaha. it turns out it wasn't. silly me.
i'm looking forward for the next chapter!

until next time,

mrs. zala

It seem way too rushed... since it was like a huge jump and it would of been awesome to see their official dates :P
But loved it (: well minus the last chapter :o