Good lord this fantastic and you only needed one more chapter to finish up this work of art *sadface*

Halfway there...2019...so close to completion...only conclusion is that you died and couldn't finish

I love your story, too bad you didn't finish, it was amazing and Jin Zuko are my favorite couple in The Last Airbender

I have to agree with everyone else, this needs to be finished! This is awesome, even if it has been 6 years. Pleeeeaaase come back and finish it! It’s so good I just read this for the first time and haven’t slept since I started 4 hours ago... i am already reradi g this tomorrow... this is awesome please continue! :)

My... This is a Master piece. Shame it has not been update. Please update, if youre dead i Will cry

I know you probably will never finish this but I found this story yesterday and stayed up all night reading it. I would love for you to finish the last chapter it feels like there is so much left unsaid. You also said it was halfway done, so even if you don’t want to finish it just posting what you have even if you don’t feel it is any good or that it is what you wanted it to turn out as, it would still be great fully appreciated

PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU FINISH THIS STORY! i know its been like 5 years, but i need it. IT'S TOO GOOD!

also theres and yours need work

You've gotta be kidding me dude! I read through 27 chapters and there is literally only one chapter needed to finish it up. I really enjoyed the story and I hope that you finish it!

Fuck you. Just, fuck you. The one thing that everyone didn't want to happen in a FANFIC and you go ahead and FANFUCK it up. Zuko should have never betrayed Iroh or Aang in the crossroads of destiny, even in the cartoon. But no, you just have to screw the story up. Good job asshole, good job.

This story is moving at a snails pace, in specific, the romance. Everything else is good it's just taking way too long to get the points across and Jin is way out of character: what were you thinking making her an earth bender AND a fighter? She's a side character from the anime. I know it's anime but please keep it at least a LITTLE REALISTC?! Don't go making random people overpowered.

Erm... is that the end?

As sad as I am that this was never finished, the final sentences are a great, albeit sad, ending, as I feel like that implies that one of them never came back. Please finish this someday. Someone?

It's good' but you need to learn grammar rules.

It is always "_ and I" NEVER "me and _"
You often type "she" when you went "he" and vice versa
Learn the difference between "to, too, and two" as well as "their, there, and they're"

You have many more errors that burned my eye sockets out and made me want to not read your story. I'm surprised I got this far.

Finally the big reveal I was waiting for

Does Jin know who he is or does she just suspect?