Reviews for Reluctant Hostility
JennCorinthos chapter 24 . 7/4
Just found this and I love your writing... Hope there is more...
Justrememberx3 chapter 24 . 5/28
Surprisingly i just logged in after such a long long time cause i miss the place here too :’)
Glad you’re back! And i Hope whatever you’re going through gets better
Guest chapter 24 . 5/21
great

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FLbeachbabe chapter 24 . 4/15
I would totally love it!
pumpkinking5 chapter 24 . 4/14
It was so nice to see your notice! Life is more important than fan fiction. Your stores always made me crave for more. You transported me to another world of HSM especially tie Troy and Gabby.

Hope you continue writing. You are a true author who words need to be put onto paper. It was nice to see our author's note and wishing us well.

I wish you well and continue happiness in everything you do! If you feel a moment of time it would be nice if you continue writing stories for HSM. If not, I am glad you are writing.

Again, thank you for the author's note! Take care especially now in these scary times for pandemic crisis.
1HSMWiLdCat chapter 24 . 4/14
Omg! I’m here! I was a faithful reader and like you, life took over and my priorities shifted tremendously.
I logged back in recently and began re-reading stories and got so emotional that this was such a huge part of my life.
Lovely to hear from you again!
HsmZanessaFansite chapter 24 . 4/14
Hi! I'm so glad you signed back in. I, too, do the same and sign in every once in awhile - as well re-read what I've written. Hope everything is going well with you. Not sure if you're thinking of maybe continuing (or finishing) your stories but if not, I'm glad you sent a message out to everyone. You were (are) one of my favorite writes on here. Might send you a direct message on here sometime this year (so I hope you sign in again to see it). I hope you keep on writing whether it's on here or just for you!
LunarEclipse360 chapter 24 . 4/14
You’re alive! I’ve missed you. Hope you are fairing well in these trying times.
Guest chapter 24 . 4/14
Nice to hear from you! I really hope you continue the story!
snorkmaiden15 chapter 24 . 4/14
I can’t believe it’s possible for people to return after so long! Recently found myself rereading hsm fanfics (and rewatching the movies,he-he), and yours were one of the best seriously! Unfortunately, there are some unfinished like bookstore hostility or firework king... so if there is at least a slim chance that you want to continue...
I’m absolutely cheering you on!:) and if you don’t have any plans, that’s a shame of course, but it’s just nice to hear from such authors after all this time.
Hope you are doing great:)
Emilyyyy00 chapter 24 . 4/13
Hi Andrea! Glad read that you're back! I know a lot of us are here waiting for whatever you have written. Cant believe it's been 7 years! OMG I'm so happy you're back!
Curious Girl chapter 23 . 6/6/2019
Wow what a great story! I really hope you will update it in the near future! I just found it and you are amazing! You have so much talent!
Thereadella chapter 23 . 1/15/2014
Please finish it!
hccstrd.haddock chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
I just got a new account since my old one was a mess, and decided to reread this story and finish it. Before I go on to later chapters, I feel like I should review this one. That being said, prepare yourself for a lengthy review.

I loved the way you wrapped up everything that was left sort of open at the end of BH, such as the status of Gabriella's mom's health. It was a good way to introduce this sequel and give a little bit of background to it.

I was pleased to see that Troy is his same grumpy self. The dialogue you wrote between him and Gabriella. It was very raw and realistic, and I could almost imagine them having that conversation right in front of me. Their subtle flirting ("Nice watch" "Nice jacket") was funny to read; I'm not quite sure why, but it made me smile.

Did I ever mention I love the Sharpay and Chad pairing? It's both unusual and humorous, and adds a bit of a refreshing glow to the story. I never imagined them together and would probably not be able to pull off writing that pairing myself without getting questioning reviews. Pumpkin and Snookums, haha:)

Now it comes time for everyone's least favorite part of the review: the critique. I know nobody wants to hear it, but I feel it needs to be addressed at some point or another.

"So after a long talk with Dr. Anderson while her mother was recuperating from surgery, Gabriella had dialed Troy's number." To be honest, I almost clicked out of the story when I saw that. "So" sounded like an awkward way to start off that sentence, and especially a whole paragraph. Another thing: why does it matter that Gabriella talked to the doctor before calling Troy? You already stated in the previous paragraph that her mom was having surgery. I would nix the doctor part and say something like, "She dialed Troy's number, only to be answered by his voicemail."

"Gabriella had called all her friends after her mother's surgery...not yet wanting to tell them about her mother's condition before she told Troy." Why is the ... there? It looks wrong to insert that in the middle of a narrative sentence (as opposed to one of dialogue). Just use a comma there. I also found a couple other spots where this was done. It makes me cringe to see that in text.

"The dog who was no longer the small puppy he once was, wagged his tail excitedly as he licked her hand all over..." Eliminate the comma.

There is more I could correct, but I won't make this review any longer than it already is. I love the characterization and the ideas, but the writing style and grammar is a bit of a distraction from the story. However, I am looking at it through a critical eye, so most other readers probably won't catch or care about this stuff. I just feel the need to point it out for the reference of the author.
Clembo29 chapter 23 . 8/31/2013
Loved it!
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