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MidnightStarHunter chapter 8 . 6/30/2018 Ugh, this story is really REALLY good, and I know that you wrote this AGES ago but now I'm sorting through all your stories to see if you have any other Toy Story fics. It would be AMAZING if you did something similar to this with Andy. Your stories rock! |
Jet Set Radio Yoyo chapter 8 . 1/3/2018 Molly is pretty great in this story. I actually really enjoyed her here, and am happy to see that she learned that she doesn't have to be in such a rush to grow up. |
marilena chapter 1 . 8/25/2017 In a high school Cinderella [twilight sparkle] was talking with her two cousins also best friends Guinevere and Tiffany about what are they going to do now because camelot is gonna be attacked by an evil man named Ruber the same man who used to be a knight at round table the very same man who used to have a mild tension for her but she rejected him because she fell in love with the young king of camelot. [Cinderella] I still can't believe he would turn from a good knight into a horrible monster like that. [Guinevere] I know Cindy You're shocked as i am but look on the bright side there's a contest from King Arthur to choose a wife which it will be surely You. [Cinderella] My boyfriend wants a wife? [Tiffany] I believe he needs You because You are the one who standed for him when we bullied him back when we were kids. [Cinderella] Yeah now we're young maidens gonna be queens of different countries. Suddenly they heard the magic mirror talk to a young man with blond hair and beard and blue eyes about wanting to have a wife because tecnically he is not the king and when the mirror said: [Magic Mirror] Fear not my lord because it's time for You to meet today's most elegant bachelerottes and here they are [goes away and shows three portraits of three beautiful young women which are Cinderella,Snow white [Guinevere] and Princess Fiona [Tiffany]. Cinderella being the first one in the portrait tried to look calm as she smiled looking down at her foot trying her glass slipper on when she felt a light hit on her shoulder and she saw Snow white [Guinevere] and Princess Fiona [Tiffany] smirking at her knowingly and she wondered why but when she turned away embarrased she looked that the young man who she presummed was the king was looking at her exactly. [Cinderella] Girls don't say anything about this!. [Guinevere] We know the mild love tension You have for him lover-girl [Tiffany] As well the look he is giving You is complete love. [Cinderella] Remind me why did i agreed to be in the competition?. She looked back at the young king who had said something to his uncle and she probably heard that how beautiful she is which made her blush in embarassment as lancelot asked him if he wants her why doesn't he marries her to her absolute shock the king started agreeing at his cousin's idea when suddenly she heard the mirror respond to the young king [Magic mirror] In love already with the young maiden in portrait number one sire?. [King Arthur] Yes magic mirror she's a true beauty a kind girl who'll be the perfect choise for queen. [Cinderella] Thank You kind sir. But before the king could ask her name she heard the snickers of her two cousins and two friends who were looking at her knowingly and she sighed in embarassment and the mirror said about her: [Mirror] Bachelerotte number one is a beautiful young lady shut out and abused from a far away kingdom but not to far from camelot she likes sushi and hot tubbing her hobbies are cleaning and cooking for her two cousins please welcome Cinderella. She really hoped that the king would choose her and she prayed that she'll be saved from the clutches of her stepmother and to her shock and surprise before the mirror could say about the second girl the young king stopped him saying: [King Arthur] I pick lady number one to become my wife!. When Cinderella heard this she imediatelly felt relief and she smiled while Guinevere and Tiffany gave her a smile surely they were disappointed they didn't won the king but they knew she loved him very much and so she and the king married and she became queen of camelot her friend clarisse was at the wedding but one day clarisse was gone and she and her husband and soem friends were searching around calling for her until her husband was told by lady diana Kayley's mother to come to the under floor. [Arthur] Diana! [Cinderella] Clarisse where are you? [Panagiotis] Lady Cinderella i'm afraid she's not here!. [Cinderella] Oooh boy if her mother find about this she'll chop our heads off. [Lenia] I hope that girl didn't made a mess and she's hiding it!, [Cinderella] Well i hope she's alive her mother will slit our throats if she fidns her dead. [Arthur] We'll find her dear Cinderella i promise. [Christina] If he promises it now i know we'll find her alive. [Cinderella] Remember when You guys and girls saw me in a portrait wearing that yellow dress and trying on my glass slipper my friend was there and she gave me thumbs up when i was chosen to be the queen. [Celi] When did You saw her last time?. [Cinderella] I saw her in the wedding but she decided to stay with us and she told me she'll go for a walk around the castle but she didn't returned. [Lenia] I fucking hope she's alive what if a spinning wheel touched her finger and she died?. [Cinderella] You're watching too much sleeping beauty lenia!. [Panagiotis] It might be true!. [Cinderella] Then we must hurry!. They walk downstairs and they arrive at the round table of the knights hoping that clarisse would be there and praying that she'll be alive while Arthur was calling for diana until he saw soemone at the table. [Ruber] Ta-ta. [Panagiotis] [spreads his arms so much and glares angrilly at ruber] Don't you dare touch anyone!. [Arthur] Ruber You're behind this!. [Cinderella] Catch me before i kill him. |
writingisrelaxing chapter 8 . 7/28/2017 BOOOOO AAAAAAGH why did she have to leave and never return in the official story? ;_; I wish this was part of the real movies. Like, a short or something. Oh god I'm crying again ;;_;; omg now I REALLY, REAAAALLY hope Bo will be in Toy Story 4 make it real pls I WANT TO BELIEVE! |
writingisrelaxing chapter 7 . 7/28/2017 Oh my god I would have never thought I'd be SO HAPPY to see such a secondary character like RC again with the others! I cried... Well I'm still crying as I write this XD |
silver wolf chapter 8 . 7/17/2017 Am glad Molly got rid of those dumb bitches! I hope Andy is not too mad about Molly being in his room. I also hope she gets more toys for her shelf. Keep up the good writing! ;-) |
asteroulaa chapter 8 . 9/4/2015 Molly(Σοφία στεργιαδου) having guilty of donating old toys goes and saves them all(rc,rocky,wheezy,snake robot and my aunt with her sheep).She was sitting in her brother's room playing with her little sister a game fun but and daisy(σοφία και μαρινα) looked at eachother grinning they shouldn't be in hurry to grow up.Η σοφία ηταν μονο 14 χρονων ενω η μαρινα 12.I look at them being pregnant by their brother worriedly saying:Oooh if your brother finds out you're in his room and playing with marina he'll kill yah.Η σοφία με κοιταει λεγωντας:Αστερουλα ανησυχεις παραπολυ και αυτο δεν κανει στην κατασταση σου μην φοβασαι θα του εξηγησω τι συνεβει.Εγω της λεω ανησυχα:Εμ Σοφία μου κανεις μια μικρη χαρη να του πεις πως εισαι εγκυος απ'ενα παιχνιδι.Αυτη λεει:Ενταξει θα προσπαθησω κι η παναγια μαζι μου ωχ τι θα περασω σημερα.Εγω λεω:Αδερφε που ειναι η τζεσι.Ο καουμποης που ειναι ο αδερφος μου λεει:Εμ βγηκε μια βολτα για στηθοσκοπειακη εξεταση αχ αστερουλα αδερφουλα ενταξει ξερω οτι ανησυχεις οτι ο αντρας σου δεν αφηνει τις αδερφες του στο δωματιο του μα τις αγαπαει το ιδιο οπως σ'αγαπαει και εσενα αλλα και εγω και η τζεσι το ιδιο.Η ραριτυ φωναζε στο κεν:Ωωω κυριε διευθυντα Ωωω βιαστη(τον χτυπα με την σκληρη μοβ ομπρελα της).Εγω λεω:Φτουσου ραριτυ φτουσου πηγαινε στην μπονι για τιμωρια θα μεινεις εκει.Η σοφία λεει:Αστερουλα κοιτα ξερω οτι νευριαζεις ευκολα επειδη δικαιολογισε στην κατασταση σου αλλα θα το εκανε καταλαθος.Η ραριτυ λεει:Οχι η αστερουλα ειχε δικιο νευριαζω ευκολα απ'οτι παλια μα με εκνευριζε γιατι χουφτωνε τον πισινο μου.Εγω λεω:Κι επειδη σε χουφτωσε αντι να του μιλησεις γλυκα του πεταξες βρισιδι και τον χτυπησες πηγαινε στο σπιτι τωρα.Η ραριτυ φευγει κλεινωντας την πορτα ενω η σοφία λεει:Καλα της εκανες γιατι και εμενα με εκνευριζει η σύμπεριφορα της.Παιρνει η χριστινα ενα υφακι της ραριτυ και η σοφία με την μαρινα και εμενα γελανε.Εγω λεω:Ολοιδια με την ραριτυ εμοιαζες χαχα.Η σοφια ειπε:Και αμα ερθει εδω η μεδουσσα θα την βαλουμε μεσα (κανει την φωνη της) Χριστινα γιωργο τι καθεστε εδω βρε χαειβανια το νου σας βρε που τον ειχατε.Η μαρινα χαχανιζει πολυ δυνατα λεγωντας:Αχ με εκανες και γελασα αδερφη.Εγω λεω χασκογελωντας:Αχαχα η ιδια την κανει.Ο Αδερφος τους γυρνουσε και ελεγε:Αναρωτιεμαι τι κανουν οι αδερφες μου με την γυναικουλα μου.Η χριστινα λεει:Πλακα ειχε ξανακαντω παλι ελα σοφια θα ειναι ωραιο.Η σοφια τρομαξε οταν ειδε εξω στην πορτα του δωματιου τον σοκαρισμενο αλλα και θυμωμενο 20χρονο αδερφο της.Εγω λεω:Ελα καντω σοφια.Αυτη λεει:Και αμα θα μπει η μεδουυσσα θα την βαλουμε μεσα στο βαλτοσκαφος(κανει την φωνη της) Αστερουλα σπιριτ(μιχαλη) τι καθοσαστε εκει κατω βρε χαειβανια το νου σας βρε που τον ειχατε (κανει πως χτυπαει με την σκουπα).Ο αδερφος γελαει λεγωντας:Χα με εκανες και γελασα.Εγω λεω:Χαχαχα η ιδια την κανει.Αυτη λεει:Τι γελατε μωρε να τους ποιασετε.Εγω λεω:Αν μας βρουνε τηλεγραφησε μας.Ο αδερφος μου εχει ενα καλο ερχεται και κανει το αφρο τσιρκο:Ραταταρα ρατα τσιρκο ραταρα αφρο τσιρκο αφρο τσιρκο μπογκαλαμπογκαλα αφρο.Εγω λεω γελωντας:Σωπα βρε αδερφε χα αυτο ηταν τελειο.Η χριστινα αρχισε να ξεντυνεται χορρευωντας στριπτης.Εγω λεω:Χα αυτο ηταν πολυ καλο.Η σοφια λεει:Μαλλον πολυ ασχημο θες να πεις γιατι ο αντρας αου εχει μεινει σε σοκ.Τον βλεπω και λεω:Αχ βρε αγαπη μου ειπαμε επειδη δεν μας παιζεις βρηκαμε να κανουμε αστεια.Αυτος λεει στην χριστινα:Πας καλα χορευεις στριπτης μπροστα στην γυναικουλα μου και στο παιδακι μου βαλε τα ρουχα σου τωρα χριστινα.Εκεινη το κανει και ερχεται ο παναγιωτης και κανει ακροβατικα οπωςο οντι και εγω λεω:Αχ παναγιωτη πολυ αστειο ηταν.Η μαρινα χορευει γυμνη ενταξει με μια φουστα λεγωντας:Γιο μα λοβερ αντεκοβερ.Εγω χαχανιζω λεγωντας:Φοβερη μαρινακι καλη δουλεια.Η λενια λεει χορευωντας φλαμεγκο:Πουτσατσουτσουμιγικα πουτσατσουτσουμιγκα.Ο αντρας μου δεν πιστευε τι ακουγε η λενια ελεγε κακιες λεξρις και εγω γελουσα.Αυτοε μου λεει:Αγαπη μου εισαι καλα το παιδακι μας ειναι καλα μ'αυτα τα εργα που βλεπει να γινονται.Εγω λεω:Ωω γλυκιε μου κοιτα καταλαμβαινω οτι δεν θες να γινονται τετοια πραγματα αλλα εγω,οι αδερφες σου και τα παιχνιδια σου θελαμε να περασουμε καλα στο κολλεγιο θα κανουμε εκδηλωσεις που δεν θα θυμιζουν το σπιτι μας.Αυτος λεει:Θα επρεπε να ζητησεις πρωτα την αδεια μου αλλα φταιω κι εγω που δεν ηρθα νωριτερα και γιατι το λες αυτο αγαπη θα προσπαθησω στο κολλεγιο να σε κανω ευτυχισμενη και εσενα και το μωρο μας.Μετα μιλαει στην κοιλια μου φιλωντας καθως εγω αναστεναζω ρωλαρωντας τα ματια μου:Μωρο μου ο μπαμπας και η μαμα love forever (φιλαει την κοιλια).Η σοφια λεει:Να συνεχισουμε αδερφε τα αστεια.Η ευγενια κανει ενα νουμερα μετα καταλαθος η ουρα του θαναση της κατεβαζει τη φουστα αποκαλυπτωντας το ροζ με ασπρες βουλες στρινκ βρακι της μπροστα στον σοκαρισμενο μου αντρα καθως γελουσα.Αυτος της λεει:Κοιτα καλυτερα να σταματηστε για λιγο θελω να σας πω κατι η ξαδερφη της αστερουλας πνιγικε.Εγω λεω:Πνιγικε μα πως αγαπη μου και ειπα πως η μερα στο κολλεγιο θα ηταν ευτυχισμενη δεν θα εχουμε εκδηλωσεις σςν εδω που κανουμε μονο μαθηματα θα διαβαζουμε.Καθως σιγοεκλεγα ο αντρας μού θελωντας να με παρηγορησει μου βαζει το αριστερο του χερι πανω στον ωμο μου καθως μου λεει:Αγαπη μου μην ανησυχεις.Εγω λεω ρουφωντας την μυτη μου:Το ξερω ειναι οτι ηθελα να μεινει ζωντανη και θα ηθελα να ειμαι παντα κοντα σου.Αυτος μου λεει:Θα εισαι αγαπη μου κι εσυ και το μωρο. |
Guest chapter 8 . 4/9/2015 I know its complete but... I cant live without a 9th chapter! |
MRS SPARKLE chapter 8 . 8/30/2014 ASTEROULA'S ADVENTURES IN WONDERLAND CHPTER 1 DOWN THE WAS BEGGINING TO GET VERY TIRED SITTING BY HER ELDER COUSINE AND NOT HAVING ANYTHING TO DO THEN HER COUSINE SAID AFTER THIS BOOK I WILL GO FOR WORK IN ITALY I WON'T COME BACK FOR LONG OR TWICE I PEEKED INSIDE THE BOOK MY COUSINE WAS READING BUT IT HAD NO PICTURES OR CONVERSTION I SAID AND WHAT'S A USE OF BOOK WITHOUT PICTURES OR CONVERSATION.I WAS IN MY WORLD OF MY OWN DESPITE THE MIND OF HOT DAY IT MADE ME TO FEEL VERY TIRED AND SHE FINISHED READING MY COUSINE KISSED ME ON MY CHEEK AND LEFT WITH HER OLDER OWNER WAS OUT OF THE HOUSE WITH HIS MOM AND TWO SISTERS TAKING PHOTOS WHY HE HAD HIS SUDDENLY AN ODDLY WHITE TALKING RABBIT WEARING MAN'S CLOTHES APPROACHED ME.I AND SLINKY[CELI] LOOKED AT WHITE RABBIT SAID TO ME EXCUSE YOUNG LADY CAN YOU TELL ME WHAT TIME IT IS.I ASKED CELI CAN I TELL HIM THE APPROVED IT AND I SAID IT'S SIX O CLOCK BUT WHY DID YOU ASKED WHITE RABBIT TOOK OUT HIS POCKETWATCH AND YELLED TO ME AND CELI I'M LATE I'M LATE OH DEAR I SHALL BE TO RUN AWAY AS I SAID CELI IT'S PERFECT A TALKING CLOTHED WHITE RABBIT COOL LET'S FOLLOW BARKS EXCITEDLY SAYING LIKE I WOULD SAY THE SAME LET'S WHITE RABBIT RUN FASTER AS I SAID ESPERA MISTER RABBIT PERO UEVO WITH CURIOUSITY I AND CELI FOLLOW HIM THE RABBIT WAS QUICK HE RAN DOWN THE RABBITHOLE.I CAME AND SAID PUTTING MY HOOF FOR EXAMINATION HELLO IS ANYONE DOWN ACCIDENTLY PUSHED ME DOWN AND I SCREAMED AHHHHHH HELP SAID BARKING WORRIEDLY OOPS ASTEROULA WAIT OH USELESS OH OLDER OWNER WEARING GRADUATED CLOTHES GASPED WORRIELDY WHERE IS MY PRINCESS HORSIE SHE FELL DOWN THERE MOM I'LL BE BACK IN NO TIME I'VE GOT TO SAVE HER.I FELL DOWN THE RABBITHOLE SCREAMING AND THEN I BALLOONED MY DRESS SAYING OH NO MY OWNER IS GONNA BE WORRIED OF THE TUNNEL WAS VERY DUSTY,COLD AND DEEP AND I DIDN'T HAD HIM TO HELP ME OR COMFORT ME I EXHALED TOO MUCH DUST AND THEN START COUGHING VERY BAD IT AFFECTED MY I FELL AND FOUND MANY EXTRORDINARY THINGS LIKE AN UPSIDE DOWN MAP,AN EMPTY STRAWBERRY MARMELADE JAR.I COUGHED AGAIN HOLDING MY LUNGS IN PAIN YELLING CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME MY LUNGS ARE HURTING I REACHED THE GROUND AND SAW THE WHITE RABBIT I SAID OH MISTER RABBIT[COUGHING VERY BADLY] PLEASE WAIT FOR ME[COUGHING IN PAIN].I RUN AND FOLOWED HIM IN A ROOM THAT HAD TOO MANY DOORS SOME BIG AND ONE SMALL.I TRIED TO UNLOCK THEM BUT IT WAS ON THE TABLE THERE WAS A SMALL GOLDEN KEY I TRIED AGAIN THE BIG DOORS NEITHER THE KEY WAS TOO SMALL TO FIT THE LOCK OR THE DOORS TO I FOUND A SMALL DOOR I WENT THERE AND OPENED IT I GASPED IN HAPPINED OUTSIDE THE DOOR WAS THE MOST BEAUTIFULEST GARDEN EVER HOW MUCH I WANTED TO GO BUT EVEN PUTTING MY HEAD IN I COULDN'T FIT BUT TWO HANDS PULLED ME OUT OF THE DOOR I SAW MY OWNER BEING WORRIED I COUGHED HOLDING MY LUNGS IN PAIN OH OWNER THEY'RE HURTING ME SO BAD [COUGHING LOUDER CRYING IN PAIN] OWNER I'M HURT PLEASE HELP OWNER ONLY HUGGS ME TIGHTLY EMBRASSING ME HORSIE I'LL TRY THE BEST TO HELP YOUR LUNGS ARE INN PAIN.I RUN BY THE TABLE IF I COULD FIND ANOTHER KEY INSTEAD I FOUND A SMALL BOTTLE WITH RED LUQUID INSIDE AND ON THE NECK OF THE BOTTLE THERE WAS A PAPER SAYING DRINK ME BEAUTIFULLY PRINTED.I SAID DRINK ME WELL I SHOULDN'T CAUSE I HEARD STORIES ABOUT CHILDREN WHO BURNED,CUT AND POISSONED THEMSELVES JUST BECAUSE THEY DIDN'T FOLLOWED THOSE ADVICES THEIR FRIENDS GAVE THEM [COUGHING IN PAIN] LIKE IF YOU HOLD A BURNED STICK FOR TOO LONG YOU'LL GET BURNED IF YOU CUT YOURSELF WITH A KNIVE IT USUALLY BLEEDS AND IF YOU DRINK SO MUCH FROM A BOTTLE MARKED POISSON IT OFTEN DISAGREES WITH YOU SOONLY OR THE BOTTLE WAS NOT MARKED POISSON AND I VENTURED TO TASTE IT I FIND IT VERY GOOD SAYING MMM IT TASTES CHERRY TART,CUSTARD,PINEAPPLE,ROAST TURKEY,TOFFEE AND HOT BUTTERED BREAD.I SAID HOLDING MY LUNGS CURIOUSER AND CURIOUSER I MUST BE SHUTTING LIKE A TELESCOPE INDEED I SHRANK SO SMALL THAT EVERYTHING WAS WAY TOO BIG THEN ME EVEN MY OWNER.I YELLED EXCITEDLY PERFECT NOW I'M THE CORRECT SIDE OH DEAR I FORGOT THE KEY NOW I WON'T BE ABLE TO GET THROUGH THE DOOR.I TRIED TO JUMP ONE OF THE LEG OF THE TABLE BUT IT WAS TOO SLIPPERY I SAT DOWN AND CRIED A BIT BUT ULTIMATE STOP AFTER I DRIED MY EYES I FELT MY OWNER'S BIG HAND PICKING ME AND BRINGING ME INTO FOR ME I FOUND A SMALL SILVER BOX AND OPENED IT I FOUND A STRAWBERRY CAKE WHICH THE WORDS EAT ME WERE BEAUTIFUL MARKED UP ON IT.I SAID WITH DETERMINATION WELL I EAT AND IF IT MAKES ME GROW LARGER I CAN REACH THE KEY AND IF IT MAKES ME GROW SMALLER I CAN CREEP UNDER THE DOOR WELL IN THAT CASE AND I DON'T CARE WHAT WILL HAPPEN.I SAT DOWN AND ATE ONE BITE BUT NOTHING HAPPENED I SAID IT DOESN'T WORKS HUH I'LL EAT IT ALL.I SAT DOWN AND SOON FINISHED THE WHOLE CAKE IN FRONT OF MY OWNER WHO SAW ME COUGHING AND GOT WORRIED I HAVE LEUKEAMIA. |
marilyn chapter 8 . 8/25/2014 CHAPTER D[EXPLAINING TO MY MISTRESS'S FEMALE COUSIN].BO PEEP[EUGENIA] ASKED A BIT UNBELIEVED ARE YOU KIDDING ME IS THIS SOME KIND OF [CHRISTINA] SAID WORRIEDLY WHILE COMFORTING A 25 YEARS OLD TWILY[ME] THIS IS NO JOKE BO YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT COLIC CAN DO TO HORSE'S LIKE HER. |
marilyn chapter 8 . 8/25/2014 TOY STORY 3 CHAPTER A[MOLLY'S PLAYTIME].ONCE UPON A TIME IN A SMALL HOUSE THERE LIVES A 4O YEARS OLD WOMAN NAMED MRS DAVIS[VAGELIO] WITH HER SON,TWO DAUGHTERS AND ONE MARE SON WENT FOR A TRIP AT COLLEGE BEFORE GRADUATING HIGH SCHOOL AND SHE WENT TO FOURTEEN YEARS OLD DUGHTER NAMED MOLLY[SOPHIE] SNEAKED IN HER BROTHER'S ROOM AND STARTED PLAYING WITH HIS TOYS.I WAS FINE VERY FINE AND IN THE SAME EXCITED I WAS PREGNANT BY BUSTER 9 MONTHS THINGS GOT DOWN.I SPEND THE REST OF MY DAYS WITH MY TWO MISTRESSES AND THEY PLAYED WITH ME VERY IT CAME THURSDAY THE DAY MY MASTER WILL RETURN IT WAS MONDAY. CHAPTER B[LABOUR PAINS]ONE FINE MORNING A VERY EXCITED 14 YEARS OLD MOLLY CAME TO HER BROTHER'S ROOM WITH A GIGGLING TWELVE YEARS OLD DAISY AND A BIT FINE 25 YEARS OLD TOOK OUT ALL HIS OLD TOYS AND START PLAYING WITH THEM THEIR MOM WAS OUT FOR A ALL OF THE SUDDEN TWILY LAID DOWN THE GROUND MOANING MAKING MOLLY AND DAISY BE ALARMED BUT WORRIED ABOUT THE LABOUR GIRLS STAYED [FROZEN] WAITING ANXIOUSLY TO SEE THEIR NEW PEEP JUMPED ON MY BACK SAYING GIDDY UP NIECIE YEE BABY SAID IN WORRIED TONE EHM BO MAYBE YOU SHOULDN'T DO SUDDENLY A BIG RUFFLING SOUND WAS HEARD MAKING 25 YEARS OLD TWILY[ME] GASP ND NEIGH BACKING AWAY MAKING MY HINDLEG TO BABY GASPS SAYING OH NO NOT GOOD NOT GOOD NOT GOOD. CHAPTER C[PROMBLEM REVELEAD]BO PEEP ASKED ME CLEARLY WORRIED TWILY NIECIE WHAT'S WRONG WHY YOUR LEGS ARE BABY SAID MORE WORRIED WHO KNOWS WHY HER LEGS ARE SAYS WE BET CHECK ON TWILY SHE MUST BE SERIOUSLY HURT SISTER YOU DO CAME CLOSE TO ME AND STARTS TO EXAMINE ME WELL A BIT BAD LUCK TWILY HAS SOMETHING CALLED OF THEM GASPED AND LOOK AT ME BEFORE BO PEEP BREAKS THE SILENCE SAYING COLIC WHT IT IS COLIC I DON'T [CHRISTINA] STARTS EXPLAINING THEM WHAT MEANS COLIC TILL SHE REACHED THE HORRIBLE END NO ONE TALK BUT REX[THANASIS] BROKE THE SILENCE WAVING HIS LITTLE ARMS PANICKLY AROUND SAYING POOR TWILY POOR TWILY OUR POOR TWILY COLIC IS BAD IT CAN KILL HER BUT PHEW DOESN'T AFFECTS THE FOAL. |
PerryRocks- Wolf Warrior chapter 8 . 4/17/2013 I really liked this story. Nice to see how it would've been if Molly played with them. C: great work! |
shadowlord123456 chapter 1 . 4/18/2012 I based my own toy story fanfic of this one. |
purpledragon6 chapter 8 . 3/28/2012 Aw! This is so cute! |
ReachForTheSky92 chapter 8 . 3/6/2012 Oh, what a wonderful happy ending and such a wonderful story. Short, but good. :) I really liked it and I really liked the Role Play, so you had two stories in one, very good. :) And I'm glad Bo Peep is okay :D I liked the ending and the way Molly showd her "friends" that she's still a child and enjoys it. That made me recognized that the children today can't wait to grow up. I see 11 or 12 year old childs who dress like a 17-year-old... When I was 11 I still played with my toys... And sometimes I wish I could be that young again, because we grow up too fast :( Anyway... good story, it's in my favourites! Well done! :) |