Poor Grievous. Why does everyone hate him so much? I’m sorry, but that was Plot Induced Stupidity at it’s finest. One, Naruto can’t use lightsabers on the spot. You need the Force. And then you need years of training. And even then, Naruto ain’t killing Grievous. He was trained by Count Dooku, who was second only to Yoda when he was a Jedi. He primarily uses Form 2 (Dooku’s style) which is extremely elegant and focuses on finesse. I think we can all agree that anyone with finesse passes through an untrained Naruto’s defense with ease. He also utilizes Form 7, which focuses on power per strike. He’s fought several Jedi Masters at once, moved faster than Obi-Wan could see, and has ripped armies apart by himself. I’m not sure where you came up with spiderwebs that can stop lightsabers, but you do you. Any form of Genjutsu would not work on the good General, because he’s just not stable. He’d no that nothing there was real. He can’t feel pain. So. That’s all I’ve gotta say. Anyways, this inspired me to write a fic about Grievous destroying Konoha...

So Obi Wan can't beat Ventress on his own... That's some play induced BS right there.
Ahsoka was holding her own just a chapter ago.

Eh... What just 'appened?

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Ley la historia esta genial deberías continuarla pero sabes deberías ponerle más mujeres a naruto como un harem no nomas a ashoka pero es mi opinión suerte y espero y continues la historia

la historia esta genial deberías continuarla por que me que con la emoción del siguiente capitulo espero y vuelvas a retomar la historia suerte

i was expecting this, a hero dies under amber skies will never be finished no matter who takes the story...

Dumb thing to leave a review about but it's bothering me so sorry in advance. Darth Maul was in no way Dooku's apprentice, Darth Maul was the original apprentice of Sideous and Dooku was his replacement

Yuuuup. At least you notify people. Bye!

liar liar pants on fire.

That was soooooo fucking awesome I hope that this will continue for al long time

Ps Naruto and ahsoka should end up stranded on a planet together

pps Naruto better not lose against the sith

Nice story wonder what's next and who Zero is anyways keep up the great work!

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Shit, It's 'Urusai' not Urasai'... Gomen, Again

Dude, please tell me you will stop buchering the art that is the japanese language. Hai and Ie mean afermative and negative not yes and no, so you can't do stuff like Hai and Ie, it's a contradiction. Also, 'red dawn' is a gross mistranslation(God I hope that is right)
Akatsuki means 'Day-break' you know, like a sun rise.
And finaly, 'teme' is a rude and offensive word for 'you', so saying 'you teme' is repeatadive. If you looking for the japaese word for 'bastard', then the correct translation is 'Yarou'. Yarou is used with the words 'baka' and 'kuso' in all the cases I've seen, so a possible japanese phrase is "Urasai, Baka Yarou!" This means in a ruff translation of the little japanese words I know (most of wich are curses, insults and sufix's) "Shut up, You Idiot Bastard!" And please note that, that phrase was veary un-formal, I guess, so meaning veary rude, if you want a for-... ah, fuck I rambled again... SHIT! I hate it when I do that, Gomen.

Just please fix the japanese, I hate it when people mistranslate japanese, German, ETC... and also, please not my japanese is limited, but I know many words from anime, and make it a piont to find the meaning of a japanese word I find interesting, the result is I learn lots of cool japanese words for every-day sentances (and cursing out shity foot-ball teams without my dad knowing what the heck I'm saying)

From, Diamond Dragon Slayer, Uzumaki Kazuma