OK this can not be a one shot. You can not do this to me. Please!

I really really hope you do a second chapter - it'd be interesting to see if Shiro would continue their previous activities while on the phone with his ex-fiancé. ;)

Yes i so totally needed that image, didn't I?

But thanks for the read, anyway.

I enjoyed it. *smirk*

you can't just stop right there, you CAN'T. no. NO NO NO NO NO! ;_;. arghhh

YOU ENDED IT WITH THAT? MY EX-FIANCEE? WHEN THEY WERE ABOUT TO ... GAH?

Lol. Have you ever watched Game of Thrones, even just the first episode with the wedding scene? They fuck. They fight. Then they get right back to fucking ... with a bit of killing in between. Can I say that the above statement fits your stories perfectly, and that the above mentioned series disturbed me greatly ... while this story completely and utterly drew me in? Cause this is better ... tons and tons better than that episode was. Gah.

Please write some more?

(And lol. Did you have to put images of Shota!Ichigo/Shiro into my head? Feel ... gah. Gah. Gah. Speeeeeeeechless.)

More chapters please. I love this

*drools* Soooo awesomely, and totally hot! More please! *begging*

Nnnngh this story's been in my head all week. A very intriguing start.

I like this so much I'm practially speechless.

Oh gosh the emotions in this are strong and I think my face is really red right now. lol I'd love to see where you take this story and what exactly you are going to have happen, so...

Please update soon

Damn, that was probably the best IchiShiro thing I read, with the exception that it's probably the best written IchiShiro I read. Okay, to start off I really enjoyed this. The frenzied syntax, the plot and feeling it gave off (by the way, great plot) I just overall liked it. I seem to really like those fics where they kind of start out of nowhere, I wrote one like that, and they just go on to create these amazing pieces.

To start off on criticizing this amazing work, I got to add, your [I can't think of the word] kind of writing style is great. It's descriptive and so very much fitting that it's rich, like a poem, and really uses words I probably wouldn't think of to explain such an event. The only problem I had at some parts were that some words were so random and maybe too creative- not sure if that's the word, that it made it a little confusing. Though, I have to give you an applause for doing something different then just hardcore yaoi- it really seemed real for a shounen-ai yaoi story that I even started to believe the characters feelings and thoughts. It got me into it so much that I had to stop. I'm weird when I read good stories cause I have to sometimes just stop to take a breather. I chuckled at the summary and how you subtly changed it.

Overall, I really enjoyed this story and excuse me for being very serious. When it comes to stories like these, I have to be.

Gosh, I can't wait to read more from you!

-youngwriter123

Damn, DAMN this is good! I really hope youll write more of this, because youve really gotten me hooked on this story! Amazing first chapter :)

I loved it. Seriously I'm totally jealous of your amazing writing skills. Hope you write more of these. Defintely got yourself fan :)

Y-...Y-You... You write more. Do it. O_O SRSLY.

Simply lovely.

Oh holy God...This is A-f*cking-mazing! Your descriptive and original writing style are a serious WIN.

It's not very often I blush when reading...anything really. You, however had me diving into the excuse pool when trying to answer why my face was so red (note to self: Read your fics in private lol).

Peculiar child of a peculiar brain, you have found yourself a devoted reader.