| Reviews for The Mist of Time |
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Anne Bond chapter 33 . 10/2 I love Fablehaven! Have you read Five Kingdoms by Brandon Mull? BTW, isn't Morgana Mordred's mother? Love this fic! |
just a fan chapter 41 . 9/1 oh my gosh. This was awesome. Absolutely fantastic. The quotes at the beginning were a nice touch too |
Annette11418 chapter 41 . 7/26 This story was fantastic! I loved the romance scenes and even how Arthur made Fred jelous. I would have liked to see more Fred and George commentary/humor and more descriptions of what everything looked like, but overall it was great! My favorite scenes where when Fred would wake up early to talk with Hermione during her night time shifts. Having the setting take place in 401 BC was a perk! |
Guest chapter 17 . 2/16 I get this weird feeling when I read a good book. It's like I'm either about to squeal or cry, and every time I read this story I get that feeling. This is amazing. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 25 . 10/23/2019 I'm hoping that the twisted evil monster mordred hasn't followed the to Scotland surely Merlin could've stopped him in some way. As if anything happens to these four great Warriors no potter head will understand it,though Fred is in tune with hermione so he Will race back to her with he feels something wrong and George will follow naturally Wands at the ready it's how the unique twins powerful magic works .everyone knows that Hermione is drop dead gorgeous worth a second or third look yet they're really spooking Her not even the death eaters did that so there must be another presence around her aura Causing that reaction from strangers I'm starting to get spooked a little myself it's like how Can ho hum mordred be stronger than Voldemort as he died earlier much earlier before Greek history it's someone from their past whom was also caught up in This strange phenomenon hopefully not a death eater or lee Jordan, Oliver wood,angel ins Bill weasley,or even Luna love good though it would be excellent to see Marlene McKinnon Brought back to life or say regulus black even though dumbledore says it's impossible this Is fan fiction isn't it where anything can happen as those two could help our four brave Warriors might need actually plus I'm positive that you could achieve this result making This utterly mesmerising hypnotic moving exciting beautifully well written classy potent Irreplaceable love story so much more timeless than it already is so why not do it As it will only enhance this powerful magnetic love story to greater heights plus regulus Could make Fred jealous please consider this idea Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 24 . 10/23/2019 Their new found love couldn't vanish into thin air when they do go back home but it will Get a lot stronger he's the real deal so she needs to stop worrying over silly things and Just enjoy being with him,plus Fred's a great dancer and all of them have to celebrate both Christmas and New Years while travelling in bonny Scotland it should be very easy as they Can use their magic so long as they're not caught except it mightn't be bad if the hopeless Ministry of magic could keep track of our bravest heroes all they need to do is think like Hermione does for once maybe a house elf could help them as they're very powerful. He's a Keeper is Fred as he really is a dream guy he's handsome, chivalrous,protective dangerous. A jokester when needed very intelligent super smart sizzling smoking hot creatively brilliant Loves children is a twin and he's a weasley/ prewett .maybe before this dangerous mission They could come upon a beautiful village and explain how they missed Christmas and receive A meal fit for three kings and their queen plus some warm cosy luxurious rooms after all It's Scotland home of the brave plus a romantic night for our two lovebirds in a part of France Set up by George naturally as a Christmas present though I'll leave it up to you however I'm Definitely enjoying this exceedingly colourful spirited highly amusing adventurous challenging Smooth complex enchanting quirky slightly spooky love story which fills ones heart with Happiness and joy amid lots of non stop contagious laughter so thank you very much for This fascinating bewitching love story that packs a punch . Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 23 . 10/7/2019 It's exceedingly amusing to find out after everything Harry's been through in his young life He cannot deal with a horse though I blame the dursleys not doing the right thing by him Growing up as he Isaac very admirable heroic Fred is right about waking up Next to the one he loves up in Scotland where they can just be themselves finally away From the puritanical Camelot court but I'll forever be on Fred's side no matter what and She's so happy at last ,though expecting her and Ron to be together because they've Known each other since they were elevenbah humbug. George might try to find out what Her wish is but he won't find out from her ever or it won't come true it's a muggle belief Though it will pass the time naturally until they succeed,once again you have more than Delighted your loyal honoured reviewers with another brilliant gripping sizzling chapter Filled with so much zany fun times lots of laughter great jokes plus an eternally strong Friendship between these four on the adventure of a lifetime off into the unknown having The most marvellous journey knowing exactly how to handle any task so King Arthur You lost the challenge besides they have survived more than you have done plus killed More truly evil villains that's the power of redheads thank you very much as we are an Underrated highly intelligent people . .but thank you so very much for this truly unexpected Savvy warm hearted beautiful feel good romance which tears at your heart strings giving off Wonderful vibes that are very colourful yet happiness abounds in this quixotic indescribably Exquisite love story the universe loves for its uniqueness . Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 23 . 9/29/2019 I've never thought of Fred as scared of anything which is very stupid of me as even the Bravest hero doesn't want to die yet he's managed the fear exceedingly well the marauders Would be very proud of Fred and so will his family when everyone returns Is just one thing that bothers me how did ugh mordreds power go into the future and choose These four friends if he wasn't related to moldy voldy somehow it cannot be a coincidence And he's messing with four powerful furious close friends whom will protect each other Particularly hermione he's a goner new found love is luminous full of starlight And wonder plus the greatest camaraderie ever it's become a story about their valour on This flight to bonnie Scotland with loved ones knowing it's going to be extremely chances To destroy that monster yet they've killed worse monsters at also love to have Them explore Scotland before heading back to Camelot it's a truly beautiful inspirational Colourful place to discover besides all of them are redheads so I'm going to ask you to Please give them a challenge while they are there of a different kind ,and maybe buy Some souvenirs to take back to the really have given your devoted reviewers One of the most miraculous scintillating thrilling enjoyable love stories which can gladden The hearts plus fuel our imaginations in a delightfully wicked weasley/ Prewett way on an interesting journey powered by love faith kindness charm humour Throughout so thank you very much for gifting us this incredible radiant golden love Story showered with moonbeams it's beyond .love Elizabeth skinner. |
Guest chapter 23 . 9/26/2019 Ah yes those beautiful stars thaT will always protect Young lovers from harm or a weird danger of anyone Back in puritanical Camelot judging her or Fred how Dare they,though Harry's still having trouble with his Horse so maybe one of his friends could give the horse Wings only merlin would know and probably be amused One cannot expect these wizards not to use their powers It's exceedingly cruel and very wrong I say this Has been a firm favourite since the first chapter except If ugly mordred was somehow related to moldy voldy Somehow he knew about these brave heroes but he Cannot kill them it's unheard of yet thank you so Very much for this heart warming hilarious romp Which your loyal reviewers will always love forever As it's incredibly ingenious clever inspired plus a Tremendous magically moving love . Love Elizabeth skinner. Then before he was killed he would've had to seek Out ariddle female now that's going to grove me Not ghtmares ugh,howEverthe adventure of alive time Has just begun with more challenges to overcome with Their charm ,grace,honor,magical order To return along with a gift given to them from merlin It will be interesting to see this monster try to kill Three red haired sorcerers and one brilliant extremely Powerful witch whom already has a long list of monsters She's let's tally ho and ride forth to find out What's in their destiny which might change them |
Fred's fanatic chapter 22 . 9/22/2019 He's definitelythesweetest most thoughtful dangerous Exceptionally handsome twin is Fred though George is Excellent also but I mean for hermione however if Rancid mordred attacks her Fred is a twin in love plus He's not a wizard anyone wants to mess with plus they Will be up in Scotland where their powers will become Stronger than mordred a ha I've never been Bored reading your one in a trillion billion magnificent Heart searching love story which has been blessed by An out of this world very energetic colourful creatively Brilliant imagination namely yours it's totally up lifting Wacky delightfully stupendous made in hogwarts or Ollivanders andthis love story was written with love Plus a weasley twins incorrigible sense of crazed Humor please do carry on with this unique skill As it makes everyone so happy God . Love Elizabeth skinner. |
Guest chapter 21 . 9/22/2019 Oh rats I like Arthur but does he really think this Particular challenge to prove will finish these mega Powerful wizarding folk off when they have destroyed Voldemort and the death eaters ,lost friends ,aNd Survived as it won't happen most monsters are Scaredy cats plus all four now have blazing red Hair meow ,though hermione would be a very Gorgeous intimidating scots witch I love Harry but He's lucky his mum was a very clever gorgeous Kind hearted witch with fiery red hair but I will Love avidly this spectacular first rate ingenious Forthright very exciting adroit classy defining Abundantly joyous warm fuzzy feelings once Hidden shining through a rainbow filled with Love the purest strongest emotion in the world As it rules our lives however your fast becoming One of my favourite fremione writers so no I Don't like this love story it's on a different plane To others as merlin ,s involved plus Camelot so Thank you very much for your inventive enterprising Utterly beautiful positively mischevious yet delightful Intoxicating rich decadent bewitching love stories I've been lucky enough to become addicted to. Gutentag tag .love Elizabeth skinner. Be reading this again as I haven't voted in the polls Yet but I will I'm still getting used to using techno However I've absolutely loved |
Fred's fanatic chapter 20 . 9/21/2019 Ah so it's that evil toad mordred whom must be related To Tom riddle as he cannot die however why single out Our gorgeous very brainy hermione knowing she has Four brave champions to fight for her honor and life Though naturally they're worried over her she's a Very uniquely gifted witch they all love plus George Is determined to play matchmaker so that's plenty Of unknown pranks occurring life is going to be Interesting in Camelot hooray. It's met considered Opinion that you must be a potter head fan whom Simply loves these delightfully incorrigible twins As they are very easy to love as every golden Sentence just glows in each chapter filled with Love empathy, understanding ,insight and a Wicked sense of humor plus alive of Camelot Which could've been the site for hogwarts Actually later on but I'm ecstatic with this Unequaled lethally sizzling captivating out Of the ordinary eerie brave spectacularly Colourful and historically accurate perfect Colossal energising passionate love story So decadently intriguing yet strangely Scary but absolutely fascinating so Thank you very much for this amazing Roller coaster .love Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 19 . 9/20/2019 What An exciting adventure they are now on being in A foreign time with strange laws wondering whom to Trust though it's up to the people they meet not to Betray these powerful much loved potter people as They are the ultimate fans favourites from the books And movies ,however I'd actually trust them while Learning everything to take back home besides its Camelot yet her room is fit for a royal princess which She is after all hermione was a spartan princess whom Won out although I disagree with that ludicrous law Over them not touching maybe merlin could help Them out but three exceptionally handsome strong Loyal knights havearrived but never hurt hermione Or you will be killed before they return home ha ha I'm really loving every great colourful extravagant Far reaching description of magical events that Lead us down the roller coaster road towards An excellent crazy journey filled with twists and Surprising turns causing non stop hilarious Laughter courtesy of Fred and George plus This time suits all of them in various ways Needed to blend in four courageous polite Well mannered war heroes that delight their Fans just by being themselves which is Thanks to you for giving them the adventure To meet this idol from a magical time along With falling in love with pitfalls surrounding Them yet they love it plus Harry seems happier Without Ron there hooray however could you Please give Fred and hermione a romantic Uninterrupted picnic in a field of magical Flowers it's time but thank you so very much For an indescribably gorgeous superb love Story God bless .love Elizabeth skinner. |
Guest chapter 18 . 9/20/2019 Well merlins very tricky indeed to know exactly what The gryffindor crest is that is unless he's a hogwarts Alumni though I'm loving the colours for their robes As blue would bring out his eyes plus green for George Means reborn and red for Harry his mum had fiery red Hair though if any lady attempts to cause any trouble Between hermione and Fred bah humbug it will never Work he's very faithful once he's found the one so they Could vanish courtesy of George naturally but Harry's Scared of a horse he faced the dark lord and thrashed Him but I agree that being stuck with these adorable Nuts would've been the greatest fun indeed plus other Women really would've been flaming jealous of her But that's coming up I suppose as Fred will be targeted For his great looks etc by some over achievers good Luck they have lost already some women are born Without any intelligence he's taken hands off but Thank you so very much for this indescribably adventurous action packed beautiful warm fuzzy Feel great highly contagious weasley tricky funny Fascinating romp to a time when magic was a no no Yet these four they came saw and conquered within Hopefully seconds I'm in seventh heaven absolute Nirvana with every scintillating charasmatic thoughtful Tense chatty occasionally scary but it's their friendship Which shines through plus the most original truest Pranks coming up probably the greatest done outside Of hogwarts I'm so very happy that you've written This. Enchantingly unusual confident all knowing Superstition filled wondrous dramatic hopeful very Interesting confusing but ultimately unforgettably Exquisite enduring love story I'll always love forever You are as great as jk Rowling trust . Love Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 17 . 9/19/2019 At last the most perfect quixotic bewitching heartfelt Moving emotionally charged chapter which breaks Your heart before healing it I've loved every sentence You wrote it's utterly brilliance personified honestly Plus she,s admitted that she loves him though she Was right about imagining a world without him in it How boring and desolate it would be but merlin won't Let anyone harm them not even Arthur so I'm quite Content with the direction with this sensationally tender Valiant stunning honest motivated selfless enduring Indulgent classy resourceful admirably well written By a very talented writer whom has take her devoted Reviewers on a magical mystery tour amid cries of Encore, encore .for this mesmerising adorable tenacious Up lifting indescribably beautiful magnetic love story That has bewitched us so thank you very much for Your graciousness Elizabeth skinner. |