What a wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed your storyline and the path you chose. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity.

I enjoy your writing immensely, you build up your scenes so well. It was so easy to be lost in emotions with Edward while he was waiting for Bella’s answer. Beautiful.

This is one of my favorite fan fiction stories. I love stories that begin with a What if premise that keeps to canon , but spins into new, unexplored territory. The sex is tasteful and non-graphic, rather than the be-all, end-all. Thanks.

This was absolutely perfect! I don’t know how I’ve never read it before but I absolutely love every single word. Thank you.

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Wonderful chapter.

I love this!

An amazing story, really well written. Beautiful, the chapters are long, but they don't feel boring. Just great.

Wow wow wow wow wow Thankyou so much for this blessing of a story. It’s so well written and I loved every second of it. I’m not sure if you’re still active on here or even still writing but i really hope you areyou’ve got such a talent. Thankyou!

Your story was well written.
I liked that the timeskip was not because of the breakup.
I loved seeing them date and fall in love (instead of having to suffer through the breakup and finding each other back).
I liked that there wasn't mortal danger or a grand breakup. The "conflict" (as in the story telling term) was Edward being a vampire (and everything, every decision, that came with it).
I loved that the dialogues and reactions (ie: Bella's reaction to finding out about Edward) were realistic and believable.
I loved that the characters were more mature and less angsty.
I loved that the characters still acted like the cannon characters, they were very much in character, just two years later / more mature. A lot of fanfics mess up the characters. Either by creative freedom (which is fine), or by mistake / not enough understanding / not enough care.

It has become my favourite fanfic.

Enserio te digo la e leeido mas de diez veces me encanta muchisimo, es tan hermosa y preciosa y la amo tanto.
Tan detallada y bien narrada la madurez de los personajes
me gusta mucho el cambio de actitud de Bella y Edward mas humano.
Muchisimas gracias me leei la traduccion.
Besos

wonderful glorious story! Reading it for,the 2nd time and it’s even more enjoyable the 2nd time around.

I have read and re-read this story many times. Still one of my favorites. Thank you!

I know you said (probably) no epilogue but I hope E & B change your mind. Would love to know how they are doing years later.

Oh this is beautiful. Love the fic and the way they are actually people. 10/10