One of my favorite stories ever, too bad it is dead.

I had thoughts of such a crossover existing, and it does. I'm ready for this Jelly.

I JUST realized this was a parody of Demon's Souls

para cuando la continuación? *o*

Holy innuendo indeed.

Well, that was faster than I thought. Konata realizing what Kagami hides inside her is great development for her, I just hope Kagami also realized what's going on.

Now it's time for the second boss battle, and Hiyori Tamura goes in with all her glory.

Good to see Patricia back to her old self, she had to know about Miyuki sooner or later. I guess she will have full control of the sword when she confronts Minami again.

This time Misao was awesome, but Hiyorin isn't far behind. The most interesting part though is the dream. Konata still has enough time before reaching the emotional Kagami for correct her, hm, appearance?

The references were pretty good too.

konata desnuda cubierta de chocolate y sobre un unicornio con alas! JAJAJAJAJAJAJA
el sueño de kagami! JAJAJAJA ella TIENE que ver eso! me parto XDDDDD

Yay yur back and do you think you could end the story with a lemon?

Gotta love Hiyorin.

Patricia seems problematic, but looks like Minami and Yutaka will be even harder to beat than the Storm King.

Even though Minami and Yutaka may be right with their beliefs, there are some things that simply can't be solved with words. Or at least isn't possible with the current conditions...

Quite amusing reunion still her racing after Kagami feels very fated.
Anyway great details, I might I never played Demon Souls before but its feels right and easy to understand.
Though one thing that mystify me is that earlier in the story Kagami met Hiyori before in the prison yet later on Hiyori did not remember an near death Dregling Kagami who she mentions of the cure and way out of her cell.
Great story!

I got to say that this story is pretty good, but it's too detailed and not enough detailed at the same time. There are so many different words that I didn't know of and I had to keep going on Google to look up their meanings, but it's still an amazing story.

But hey, I still like it and you continue no matter what. I'm waiting. It's good to learn new words, and it's my fault for being so idiotic and lazy.

It took me a while to finally finish reading all the chapters, but that's only because of the words and from me being lazy.

i finally finished reading all 22 chapters so far in 1 day, started on Friday and ended on Saturday. and i gotta say, this is one of the longest fanfictions i have ever read, and it's only going to get longer. anyway, i am really enjoying this story so far, it no doubt had me intrigued for the entire 22 chapters i was reading it, the only thing that held me back from reading was ZombiU, i wanted to play it but i knew that i'd forget what happened in the story and would forget where to continue from if i played it. the only complaints i might have for you is that i noticed a couple spelling errors, very little amount of them though. also, i think that from chapters 10-20 the flashbacks weren't stretched out enough between each flashback. it just needed a LITTLE more time between each flashback. Even though countless times you've said that you think this story is bad. i don't and personally i can't wait to see more chapters from you, keep up the great work!

I like the story and I want you to make more I'm very entertained by this very good job.

To think I believed this story was abandoned but I'm glad im wrong. Extra long chapter too just the way I like them, much appreciated author-san.

BTW wooooo dark souls 2

oh dios! creí que estaba abandonado!
me a gustado mucho el capitulo *.*
pero porque lo dejaste cuando empezaba el konami... T-T
sube el siguiente capitulo rapido esta vez please w