si ma questa storia e tropo bella

carina

An interesting story, thank you. I like the unusual way how Severus was saved, closing a bit of the age gap, too. I did not like that in the end two of the offenders are simply killed, the third, who is doubtless a miscreant, fatally hurt without as much as a bad conscience and in consequence, how the deed was hushed up. Until the second to last chapter I considered in earnest to ask for your permission to translate the story, but I cannot agree with this kind of vigilante justice in the end.

Fantastic story, thank you for sharing. Original plot while staying true to the main characters personalities. Can't wait to read more of your stories... From a new fan..

The premise of this story is interesting and different, but I feel like everything is being glazed over. Why are they falling in love with each other? You barely see them interact and then suddenly they're in love?

Enjoyed your story very much. Thank you for sharing.

love this!

Thank you, Ms Author. This was a very fun story—new beginnings, 2nd chances, romance, adventure, danger, good guys/bad guys, and a happy ending. Most enjoyable.

Well at least the assault-memory scene came 2 chapter later. I was hoping Severus would recognize one of them.

Lemme guess - Hermione is attacked, kidnapped, raped, or obliviated in the next chapter...

This is one of the better plot premises for a HG/SS story I've found, but I am a bit dismayed at the large gaps of time missing between chapters. I feel the time skips make the story clunky and rushed. I liked it though, but I think I'd love it if the progression of time was smoother and showed a bit more of the in-between moments - not only in the Hermione/Severus interactions, but also a slower build up of Ambrose's schemes, and even Hermione's potion experiments.

It's a pity, really: There are so many great, nicely-written stories out there, and hardly a chance to find them once they've decended into the Nirvana of the vast Potter fanfiction universe. This is one of these gems. I only found it in the favourite's list of another reader. I wonder what else I missed?

Excellent story.

I cannot beleive that pureblooods are just so IGNORANT of how magic works. Still thinking that muggle borns have STOLEN the magic of purebloods - are they really that stupid? Magic is like energy. It never completely disappears.

Sooner or later the magic will show up again amongst the descendents of a squib - even if the purebloods think that squibs cannot pass their magic on. Magic can lie dormant for a number of generations before it activates again. This is how genetics works. It's a pity that the purebloods have no interest in genetics!

Excellent!

great story :).

Happy new year, dear author.